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catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited July 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she stands she waits
the sun in her face
a breeze at her back
a smile betrays
a resolve she cant maintain
she promised herself
never again
a promise she can not keep

she stands she waits
a thought in her head
a tug at her heart
she holds her hand out
his chance to reciprocate
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    this is really good cate...


    I like it a lot.

    that feeling of waiting, wanting someone to reciprocate,...

    thank you. good stuff.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    she sits there as the words go screaming round her head
    its really very late at night and shes deciding if she should go to bed.
    it will be quiet there... she will be safe
    once asleep she knows the noise it will abate
    but then she wonders,though not much cause she knows
    when she wakes will it all be just the same?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    in one hand her heart
    in the other her death
    her mind divided
    not much left of her breath
    she looks for peace
    her vision blinded
    her cries to the heavens
    only serves to remind her
    of a time left behind
    that continues to bind fast
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    catefrances wrote:
    she stands she waits
    the sun in her face
    a breeze at her back
    a smile betrays
    a resolve she cant maintain
    she promised herself
    never again
    a promise she can not keep

    she stands she waits
    a thought in her head
    a tug at her heart
    she holds her hand out
    his chance to reciprocate


    I like this one " Never again.... a promise she can not keep " I like this line in you poem. Thank you for sharing.
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    catefrances wrote:
    in one hand her heart
    in the other her death
    her mind divided
    not much left of her breath
    she looks for peace
    her vision blinded
    her cries to the heavens
    only serves to remind her
    of a time left behind
    that continues to bind fast


    This is very good too. Words that are so true. Thank you.
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