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Inspiration Osmosis

DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
edited June 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Everytime I come to the Poetry Board, and try to pick up inspirational writing vibes just from being here, and try to totally NOT concentrate on anything, time and time again the only thing that enters my mind is:


I had a dog named Rover
Put him in a box
and he shit all over


Although it DOES rhyme, it doesn't even qualify as a lousy haiku.

HELP!
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    melt and go

    nothing is everything inside
    all of it is you
    is yours

    no more any
    but yours is endless
    each of us
    nothing
    something

    ending is starting

    good luck...
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Broken
    Sad
    Never
    had

    Light
    drained
    Dusk
    Pain

    Come
    again
    once
    more

    Sleep
    harbor
    Night
    shore

    Dream
    filled
    Canyon
    ridge

    Open
    door
    Tumble
    bridge

    Hollow
    horizon
    never
    more

    Around the bend
    We'll see
    I'm sure
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    that sounded fun as i read it.
    kinda rolled off the tongue rather nicely.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    chadwick wrote:
    that sounded fun as i read it.
    kinda rolled off the tongue rather nicely.

    Thanks


    Rolled off my brain rather nicely too
    Rover was nowhere to be found
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    edited June 2012
    inspiration is a powerful thing.
    Post edited by rollings on
  • PilateOfTheStormPilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    Dang Dang wrote:
    I read once on a church sign that the best gift you can give someone is encouragement

    Less than a year ago, a poem to me was.....well, look at the original post in this thread... :?

    Thank you Chadwick for your encouragement and also to all the kind-hearted people on here...Chickweed, Across Oceans, Godfather, Mikalina, Tremors, Pandora, Heart-Shaped Box, Pepper, Pilate of the Storm, Wolf.

    For all of us, encouragement, I believe, is a powerful thing.

    i agree 100 %.
    and i second that thanks, to everyone for sharing, encouraging, inspiring
    it's great.

    and that WAS fun to read Dang Dang :)
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Dang Dang wrote:
    For all of us, encouragement, I believe, is a powerful thing.
    :wave:


    Truer words there are not. :clap:

    Having almost drowned in negativity and me me me,
    I have found the only way to be
    is positively positive.

    This force changes lives all around,
    and then around.

    But mostly it changes me. :D
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    DangDang wrote:
    Everytime I come to the Poetry Board, and try to pick up inspirational writing vibes just from being here, and try to totally NOT concentrate on anything, time and time again the only thing that enters my mind is:


    I had a dog named Rover
    Put him in a box
    and he shit all over


    Although it DOES rhyme, it doesn't even qualify as a lousy haiku.

    HELP!


    concentrate on this
    PJ20 girl

    it is FUCKING on

    other that those words
    i have no other inspiration
    i just can't stomach turning out another death poem for mr weed
    i can no longer write about the wars inside or out

    but my heart loves your heart
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    chickweed wrote:
    DangDang wrote:
    Everytime I come to the Poetry Board, and try to pick up inspirational writing vibes just from being here, and try to totally NOT concentrate on anything, time and time again the only thing that enters my mind is:


    I had a dog named Rover
    Put him in a box
    and he shit all over


    Although it DOES rhyme, it doesn't even qualify as a lousy haiku.

    HELP!


    concentrate on this
    PJ20 girl

    it is FUCKING on

    other that those words
    i have no other inspiration
    i just can't stomach turning out another death poem for mr weed
    i can no longer write about the wars inside or out

    but my heart loves your heart

    Hey silly Chicky,
    that post--I wrote almost exacty one year ago
    when the only poem I EVER wrote
    was about Rover & the brown word

    smiley_heart.gif
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    from rover & the brown word
    to
    Dragging Down Plenty
    to
    it is not love that goes away

    mmmmm

    such a downturn
    what
    writer's block?














    :o
    :mrgreen:
    :lol:
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    DangDang wrote:

    I had a dog named Rover
    Put him in a box
    and he shit all over

    this is the kind of attitude I could live by ... make it a signature
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    DangDang wrote:

    I had a dog named Rover
    Put him in a box
    and he shit all over

    this is the kind of attitude I could live by ... make it a signature

    red rover
    red rover
    send acrosssSssshit
    on over
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    chickweed wrote:
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    DangDang wrote:

    I had a dog named Rover
    Put him in a box
    and he shit all over

    this is the kind of attitude I could live by ... make it a signature

    red rover
    red rover
    send acrosssSssshit
    on over

    across the shit
    that the mut shat all over
    how long have you had that signature?!nickster
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