"So Much for Eternity" (Amended)

lobb152
lobb152 Posts: 193
edited May 2019 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Every day we die, one morning we will forget to wake. Waving goodbye to this life, or perhaps, we just remember our fate. With a smile upon my finger, I trace your name. Sitting, laughing, and loving with the clouds running in place. Tears roll down, as the breeze takes me away; I wipe them from your face.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    This one holds a feeling well.
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  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lobb152 wrote:
    Every day we die, one morning we will forget to wake. Waving goodbye to this life, or perhaps, we just remember our fate. With a smile upon my finger, I trace your name. Sitting, laughing, and loving with the clouds running in place. Tears roll down, as the breeze takes me away; I wipe them from your face.
    very cool I like it !

    Godfather.

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