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Distance

runawayrunaway Posts: 427
edited June 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She waits for him to recognize her again
When he does, it is as though there is nothing
between them
How hollow can the heart become through absence?
She has come to know herself and her needs
Will he be able to handle her independence?
True love can only be between two
Music is the universal language
What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
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Comments

  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i like your poem.
    it has great potential.
    writing is badass...
    :thumbup:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    thank you, had a bad night and wrote some pretty strange shit before that one....thanks for the comment
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    looking forward to reading some of your other stuff.
    thanks. :)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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