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A simple question for you...

Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
edited June 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Whispered life
faint breath
Everything in hiding

Deeper and deeper
you dig
Soon you will come out the otherside
you will be exposed and all will be unmasked

My life remains numb, gray
I have seen the sun peek through the clouds
but the world still looked black as night
the haze hanging low and thick
hard to breathe

When will I see the sun
when will I speak but love
when will I find the truth
when will I hit the bottom
Unfortunately, I have placed this all within you

How do you wish to spend your days
looking back
regret, shame, pain, lost loves
Wondering what could have, should have been

What is the point
The point of this life
Is it worth living
This is my question to you
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  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    seems simple really...this is a great piece
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    If only you could pick your family members... *sigh*
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    heartfelt...and the answer is obvious to me..i hope it is to you as well. be sound. :)
    peace,
    jo

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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Old people can tell you, any day you wake up is a good day in view of the alternative.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    ms. wes c.addle wrote:
    Whispered life
    faint breath
    Everything in hiding

    Deeper and deeper
    you dig
    Soon you will come out the otherside
    you will be exposed and all will be unmasked

    My life remains numb, gray
    I have seen the sun peek through the clouds
    but the world still looked black as night
    the haze hanging low and thick
    hard to breathe

    When will I see the sun
    when will I speak but love
    when will I find the truth
    when will I hit the bottom
    Unfortunately, I have placed this all within you

    How do you wish to spend your days
    looking back
    regret, shame, pain, lost loves
    Wondering what could have, should have been

    What is the point
    The point of this life
    Is it worth living
    This is my question to you
    If this is a question, yes, it is worth living for the people who love you.
    If this is a beautiful soul searching thought, thank you for sharing your heart.
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    Thanks for all the replies!

    Life is far too short to be shitty to others and not be honest and upfront.

    "Life is what you make it" plain and simple....

    Xoxo's to all of you!
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    :)
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