Thermodynamics

eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
Thermodynamics

Once again
Living off rum
Cigarettes
and no more
Than five hours
Of sleep
Allows me
To feel the years
I have
Subjected myself
To similar treatment

Seem to remember
Mornings
When I could shake
The burn
With another drink
Rip or drop
Of flying eyeball

When considering
The bloodshot skeleton
Hanging above
The bathroom sink
I start to believe
These memories
Are the fables
Of another man
I liked well enough
To call my own
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    I can relate.

    Cool piece.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    the wolf wrote:
    I can relate.

    Cool piece.

    same here.
    and yes, cool piece.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    I can relate.

    Cool piece.

    same here.
    and yes, cool piece.

    Thanks guys. It is an old one from the next collection I am putting together.

    Knee-Deep - 1996- 1999
    Sex, Drugs, and Basketball? - 1999 - 2001

    I have much catching up to do.
    Idaho's Premier Outdoor Writer

    Please Support My Writing Habit By Purchasing A Book:

    https://www.createspace.com/3437020

    http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100000663025696

    http://earthtremors.blogspot.com/
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    eyedclaar wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    I can relate.

    Cool piece.

    same here.
    and yes, cool piece.

    Thanks guys. It is an old one from the next collection I am putting together.

    Knee-Deep - 1996- 1999
    Sex, Drugs, and Basketball? - 1999 - 2001

    I have much catching up to do.

    that's good, very good.
    when i look through my older writing i wanna vomit. (and i have boxes full)
    i cannot stand to read my older stuff even if it is decent.

    good luck in putting together your ever growing writing collection.
    lemme know if you ever do vomit.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    I can relate.

    Cool piece.

    same here.
    and yes, cool piece.

    damn, me too
    and, me too
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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