Thermodynamics
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Thermodynamics
Once again
Living off rum
Cigarettes
and no more
Than five hours
Of sleep
Allows me
To feel the years
I have
Subjected myself
To similar treatment
Seem to remember
Mornings
When I could shake
The burn
With another drink
Rip or drop
Of flying eyeball
When considering
The bloodshot skeleton
Hanging above
The bathroom sink
I start to believe
These memories
Are the fables
Of another man
I liked well enough
To call my own
Once again
Living off rum
Cigarettes
and no more
Than five hours
Of sleep
Allows me
To feel the years
I have
Subjected myself
To similar treatment
Seem to remember
Mornings
When I could shake
The burn
With another drink
Rip or drop
Of flying eyeball
When considering
The bloodshot skeleton
Hanging above
The bathroom sink
I start to believe
These memories
Are the fables
Of another man
I liked well enough
To call my own
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Cool piece.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
same here.
and yes, cool piece.
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
Thanks guys. It is an old one from the next collection I am putting together.
Knee-Deep - 1996- 1999
Sex, Drugs, and Basketball? - 1999 - 2001
I have much catching up to do.
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that's good, very good.
when i look through my older writing i wanna vomit. (and i have boxes full)
i cannot stand to read my older stuff even if it is decent.
good luck in putting together your ever growing writing collection.
lemme know if you ever do vomit.
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
damn, me too
and, me too
"what a long, strange trip it's been"