flying out to say goodbye

jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
Flying high for the first time
Flying out to say goodbye.
When we land ill be tempted again
And when we get back home ill be reborn.

Sun blocked by sadness
I'm seeking answers
Sun blocked by madness
We fight the cancer.

Time doesn't seem to matter up in the sky
Hit the ground before I close my eyes.
Hold your breath and don't mind the pressure
Our lives a distance we can't measure.

Sun blocked by sadness
I'm seeking answers
Seem to be so far from truth
When the plane goes down in unknown waters
Baptized by fire the sins of youth.


Something I wrote the other day flying for the first time going out to Nebraska for my cousins funeral
Drowned at 18 years old
Rest in peace Gabriel
<b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
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  • I'm not that good when I fly, and so there's something in your words which I feel... nice poem
  • jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
    Thank you
    <b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
    We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

    Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
  • and so sorry for your loss...sad
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    This is VERY good. It is indeed sad to loose someone so young. I hope your writing brought you some comfort.
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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