If you could listen

-Buru-

I don't think I have posted this one here, hope you like it


If you could believe these words,
See them as a sunset
Bleeding over floors,
Feel them orange existence
And light walls,
Understand they reach
And grope to home a thought,
So easily you'd realize
They know no boundaries
No end… No code.

They breathe in colors
And paint the tree you hide upon
They hue the leaves that hold your hope
They root the very existence
Of your thought

If you could listen
Then you would smile
And common the sense
Grown cold and hard

If you could listen
You would understand
The love in words,
The loving held

If you could listen,

I know you'd smile.

justam

Buru, I like the warmth in this one!

dimitrispearljam

cheers from Greece to Argentina!!!i love that one chika!!!

-Buru-

thanks justam and dimitri

I am glad you feel the warmth in that one, it is what I was aiming for.

Ms. Wes C.addle

It paints a hopeful picture in my mind... Well done and thanks for posting it.

chadwick

thank you
i like it

-Buru-

it is not often i post a hopeful sort of cheery poem (so make the most of it haha)

DopeBeastie