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Finish this storyline...

StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
edited May 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Finish this story line...everyone can add a sentence or two or up to a paragraph.
Let's make it interesting, relative, and really good!
I have in mind an edge of your seat, page turner here....

I'll start

She may never know what woke her out of a dreamless sleep that night. It wasn't the storm, she was sure of it...she adored the rain and thunder...they lulled her to sleep. No amount of thunder and rain were going to allow her to sleep again this night.

............... YOUR TURN
peace,
jo

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  • ed243421ed243421 Posts: 7,659
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    StillHere wrote:
    She may never know what woke her out of a dreamless sleep that night. It wasn't the storm, she was sure of it...she adored the rain and thunder...they lulled her to sleep. No amount of thunder and rain were going to allow her to sleep again this night.

    ............... YOUR TURN

    Her thoughts drifted to a quiet, more simple time. A time when she knew what was real, what was honest.
    Peace, Love.

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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    the wolf wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    She may never know what woke her out of a dreamless sleep that night. It wasn't the storm, she was sure of it...she adored the rain and thunder...they lulled her to sleep. No amount of thunder and rain were going to allow her to sleep again this night.

    ............... YOUR TURN

    Her thoughts drifted to a quiet, more simple time. A time when she knew what was real, what was honest.

    When had all this started? She wasn't quite sure. Was it that night, or had it been creeping in stealthily for all this time? Had they been right all along. No, she wouldn't believe that...not now...not after...
    peace,
    jo

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    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • CJMST3KCJMST3K Posts: 9,722
    StillHere wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    She may never know what woke her out of a dreamless sleep that night. It wasn't the storm, she was sure of it...she adored the rain and thunder...they lulled her to sleep. No amount of thunder and rain were going to allow her to sleep again this night.

    ............... YOUR TURN

    Her thoughts drifted to a quiet, more simple time. A time when she knew what was real, what was honest.

    When had all this started? She wasn't quite sure. Was it that night, or had it been creeping in stealthily for all this time? Had they been right all along. No, she wouldn't believe that...not now...not after...

    Suddenly, he was standing in the door. His silver pistol in one hand. A quarter-empty bottle of Schnaaps in the other. She said "I told you before!" He didn't budge. "Get out!" she cried again. He pointed... and she closed her eyes...
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    a thousand thoughts swirled inside her head....the storm still raged outside; no longer soothing, it seemed now a dark omen of what was to become her life....or ....thunder crashed...so loud this time she felt as if it reverberated in her very being.
    peace,
    jo

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    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
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