on the rocks and on the edge
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on the rocks
on the edge
something's calling out
and this time I hear it
I've traveled far
to where I'm from
I'd felt lost
but I found home
on the rocks and on the edge
we were calling out
and You were there
the night sea was black
the night sea was mad
the waves they crashed
and we fuckin stayed
we sang those songs
from yesterday
we met the waves
halfway
our voices were heard
far away
in a world You've made
for another day
on the rocks
we were on the edge
You heard our songs
I know You never left
this is the land
where I'm from
here I may be lost
but I know this is home
on the edge
something's calling out
and this time I hear it
I've traveled far
to where I'm from
I'd felt lost
but I found home
on the rocks and on the edge
we were calling out
and You were there
the night sea was black
the night sea was mad
the waves they crashed
and we fuckin stayed
we sang those songs
from yesterday
we met the waves
halfway
our voices were heard
far away
in a world You've made
for another day
on the rocks
we were on the edge
You heard our songs
I know You never left
this is the land
where I'm from
here I may be lost
but I know this is home
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nice !0
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for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
Nicely Done! :thumbup:
Wish you were here...
♥~RIP Dad0 -
very good my friend. :thumbup:Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel0 -
thank you all my friends from far away...0
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I like this one too.&&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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this one is great!!!!"...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
"..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
“..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”0 -
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I so appreciate that you all appreciate: )0
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Very nice! Thank You.0
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'the night sea was black
the night sea was mad
the waves they crashed
and we fuckin stayed'
This felt very passionate...I really love it!Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...0 -
another great one my friend, XLNT !
Godfather.0 -
'home a feeling not a place'
I love your poem, your words
for me, just me, it is the faith I found.0 -
you are all too kind... thank you so much0
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me too
me too
me toofuck 'em if they can't take a joke
"what a long, strange trip it's been"0 -
lettinggo wrote:me too
me too
me too
won't forget you : )
....
on the rock
I stayed on the edge
and I missed...what I saw beyond the sea
so far away0 -
acrossOceans wrote:you are all too kind... thank you so much
Thank you, for your wonderful poetry. I too enjoy the ocean very much. You describe it so well, I'm glad your home and all is well. Take care,
Mika*********************************************************************************************
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Hi Mika... I'm no longer there ... went up in the air, and your wishes carried me safely back here: )
stay well0
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