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CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lost on the same old, it's broken, confused
I'm holding on to beautiful, although that its you
and maybe the song that your singing comes true
but maybe the day just breaks

so come on and meet me inside
and with these autumn leaves, some old habits must die
'cause the moon makes for diamonds inside of your sky
and to think its just a play of the light

Fought, cause a fight, becomes a shoulder to you
I'm reaching out to nothingness, think i found it in you
and if we could change things i think i'd assume.........

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kpUt7mgTlLs
None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This sounds good! :)
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  • CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
    My favorite song we wrote so far
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K8vP3mFi8mM
    None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
    Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    I think I already told you this is incredible, but it really is.... you should post more- get it out there!! :D
  • CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
    ms. wes c.addle wrote:
    I think I already told you this is incredible, but it really is.... you should post more- get it out there!! :D
    Ya think?? Can you see me blushing??? Thanx buddy, you are too cool!!
    None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
    Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    Cavstarr313 wrote:
    ms. wes c.addle wrote:
    I think I already told you this is incredible, but it really is.... you should post more- get it out there!! :D
    Ya think?? Can you see me blushing??? Thanx buddy, you are too cool!!
    Don't be blushing! There is no need! This is a perfect place to display talent.
    Nothing wrong with that....... Need to keep spreading the word somehow, right? :)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Really, I've listened to two more songs now in the last few minutes, and you should put a BUNCH up for people. :D
    They're good!
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  • CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
    I know they only give you 30 seconds of each but....

    http://itunes.apple.com/us/album/a-beau ... d310297183
    None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
    Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
  • CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
    Setting Sun
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vvrb5Zb2 ... re=related
    None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
    Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this setting sun song.
    Can you put the lyrics up?
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  • CAVSTARR313CAVSTARR313 Posts: 8,756
    SETTING SUN

    If it's cold like a northern rain
    I'll be sitting here, i'll finally feel no pain
    lessons call, somethings you just can't steal
    where the moments pass, forevers just as real
    if its love i feel than should i be ashamed?
    'cause i don't know you, i only know your name
    It flashes out just like a night time comes
    I wanna be that cloud that pushed away your storm

    If I'm your setting sun, i would wonder why you just can't move on
    If your my rising moon, it only means i know that i will see you soon

    Vision called me like a rising tide
    but i never knew when i looked in you eyes
    like a lighted match that brightened up my life
    and the fear escaped me 'cause i seen it twice

    If I'm your setting sun, i would wonder why you just can't move on
    If your my rising moon, it only means i know that i will see you soon

    all the daylight in your eyes, gives me something to believe in....
    None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe that they are free.
    Abrn Hlls '98 - Clarkston 2 '03 - Grd Rpds '06 - Abrn Hlls '06 - Clvd '10 - PJ20 - Berlin 1+2 '12 - Wrigley '13 - Pitt '13- buff '13- Philly 1+2 '13 - Seattle '13
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Thanks!
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  • whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
    wow Justam!!!! I love reading your stuff when I get to come here, and you've always said positive things about the things I've written; I had NO idea you were so exquisitely multi-talented. I agree, you SHOULD put lots more out to hear.. I'm gonna keep checking for new ones now, I REALLLLLLLLY love Setting Sun..as always great work.. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Whispering hands, these are Cavstarr313's songs. He's the one you need to get excited about! :)
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