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Ineffable

pepperpepper Posts: 155
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Curse my naked body
and wrap your flesh around my heart

Give rise to my playful eyes
and watch as their silence discovers you

Kiss the secrets from my lips
and taste of the truth

Enter me, dance with my demons
and still feel free.
Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    killer !!!!!! I like it.

    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Into the black here we go again.
    pretty little child close your eye's
    I'm coming home tonight
    In your sleep,in your dream's.

    I'll take you from this nightmare of pain
    into a place where you will be mine
    all that was then is now is to end
    give me your hand so that you will understand,
    there is black in your eyes,
    I will show you the light,tonight you are mine.

    Your smile is screaming for rest,peace for ever more
    close your eye's,open the door
    Tonight you are mine,in your sleep in your dream's.

    The silent crash of thunder opens up the night
    to a place I will take you where pain is a distant memory
    and your dream's and sleep no longer fight
    give me your hand so that you will understand
    dance in the light,dance with me
    Tonight you are mine.

    Curse my naked body
    and wrap your flesh around my heart

    Give rise to my playful eyes
    and watch as their silence discovers you

    Kiss the secrets from my lips
    and taste of the truth

    Enter me, dance with my demons
    and still feel free.
    tonight you are mine..


    I know The Black was kinda creepy but Ineffable kinda worked with it real well I think. :) hope you don't mind me doing this it just looked like a cool idea.

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    great writing.
    i like your work.
    in a classroom we critiqued each others stuff.
    i hope you don't mind??



    Curse my naked body
    wrap your flesh around my heart

    Give rise to my playful eyes
    and watch as their silence discovers you

    Kiss secrets from my lips
    and taste truth

    Enter me, dance with my demons
    and still feel free.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    Thanks Godfather... I really like what you did... definately cool!!!

    Chadwick thanks for reading my stuff, I really appreciate it.
    That was actually how I wrote it the first time I scribbled it on paper, (no kidding), sometimes I don't think we should be given time to edit things :) thanks for taking the time out to critique it.
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    Is it bad to be somewhat turned on by all that you write, even if its not at all sexual?
    I think I have a crush! :lol:
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