The Black...a creepy love poem.
Godfather.
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Into the black here we go again.
pretty little child close your eye's
I'm coming home tonight
In your sleep,in your dream's.
I'll take you from this nightmare of pain
into a place where you will be mine
all that was then is now is to end
give me your hand so that you will understand,
there is black in your eyes,
I will show you the light,tonight you are mine.
Your smile is screaming for rest,peace for ever more
close your eye's,open the door
Tonight you are mine,in your sleep in your dream's.
The silent crash of thunder opens up the night
to a place I will take you where pain is a distant memory
and your dream's and sleep no longer fight
give me your hand so that you will understand
dance in the light,dance with me
Tonight you are mine.
Godfather.
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pretty little child close your eye's
I'm coming home tonight
In your sleep,in your dream's.
I'll take you from this nightmare of pain
into a place where you will be mine
all that was then is now is to end
give me your hand so that you will understand,
there is black in your eyes,
I will show you the light,tonight you are mine.
Your smile is screaming for rest,peace for ever more
close your eye's,open the door
Tonight you are mine,in your sleep in your dream's.
The silent crash of thunder opens up the night
to a place I will take you where pain is a distant memory
and your dream's and sleep no longer fight
give me your hand so that you will understand
dance in the light,dance with me
Tonight you are mine.
Godfather.
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interesting angle
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
LOL!!! thanks, kinda creepy I know but I was trying to put scary in to poetry, the only thing scary about
this poem is it's a little too weird
Godfather.
Well....mission accomplished I'd say. It IS really very good. But, it is also very disturbing to me.
"You put some udder cream on that shit?" ~EV 5/17/10
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=caeWEvyhoYk
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
I've been there bro (concert) Ozzy ROCKS !!! while I was checking out the Oz vid I had to look up some old Alice Cooper "unfinished sweet" check it out.
Godfather.
cool
Godfather.
Wish you were here...
♥~RIP Dad
your avatar is sooo cool !
Godfather.
cool my Brother.
Godfather.
Wish you were here...
♥~RIP Dad
I do respect you, but hey...???
well Doc I am sure you'll find more mistakes in my writing as time goes by
spelling was never a strong point for me
you may just have to sift through jumbled mess of spelling and other mistakes, the brain has a knack for reading word's that are mis-spelled but thanks for the spell check I'll fix it
Godfather.