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pepperpepper Posts: 155
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
We lay, blanketed by the dark
forgotten by the light, as shadows
remembered by our sight, as a naked excuse
and as naked as I lay
I can see
and as veiled as you are
I can see
I see... you.

Folded in flesh, softening faith with our breath
we're covered in darkness with a clear blue sky
swallowed in its secret
and as I lay twisting with you
I can see
and as I lay tasting you
I can see
I see... you
all I see is... you
I see all of you.
Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    very good, I like it.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    nothing short of incredible...



    i am speechless
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    maybe I should start writing about...the intercourses of men and women :lol: ! Ms. Pepper you write wonderfully of the intimacies of man and woman! :)
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    Thankyou so much for your comments!

    And Skye....I think you should ;)
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    maybe I should start writing about...the intercourses of men and women :lol: ! Ms. Pepper you write wonderfully of the intimacies of man and woman! :)

    Hmm, I always read her stuff as way more than just being about intercourse.
    Something much deeper. ( no pun intended )

    Either way, you are right. She does write wonderfully.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Pepper, you have a talent for this type of poem.
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  • DrWeilandDrWeiland Posts: 81
    "Folded in flesh" I really like this!
    "Here's a token of my openness..."
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    Thankyou all!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    the wolf wrote:
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    maybe I should start writing about...the intercourses of men and women :lol: ! Ms. Pepper you write wonderfully of the intimacies of man and woman! :)

    Hmm, I always read her stuff as way more than just being about intercourse.
    Something much deeper. ( no pun intended )

    Either way, you are right. She does write wonderfully.
    Mr Wolf...my kind sir...intercourse has more than one meaning ;) and that is what I intended. :lol:
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    maybe I should start writing about...the intercourses of men and women :lol: ! Ms. Pepper you write wonderfully of the intimacies of man and woman! :)

    Hmm, I always read her stuff as way more than just being about intercourse.
    Something much deeper. ( no pun intended )

    Either way, you are right. She does write wonderfully.
    Mr Wolf...my kind sir...intercourse has more than one meaning ;) and that is what I intended. :lol:

    I'm aware of the meaning(s) of intercourse, I didn't mean to imply that you were saying anything really. I was just making conversation about the poem. Sorry if you thought different. My bad.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    pepper wrote:
    We lay, blanketed by the dark
    forgotten by the light, as shadows
    remembered by our sight, as a naked excuse
    and as naked as I lay
    I can see
    and as veiled as you are
    I can see
    I see... you.

    Folded in flesh, softening faith with our breath
    we're covered in darkness with a clear blue sky
    swallowed in its secret
    and as I lay twisting with you
    I can see
    and as I lay tasting you
    I can see
    I see... you
    all I see is... you
    I see all of you.
    Very Nice!

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
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