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Dragons fire.

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
my only memories of you are winged in dreams
a monarch in flight.
passion flower's and butterfly kisses
I've always had a eye on you
even then I knew you were mine.

a dragons smile and deep blue eyes
am I the only one to see through your disguise.

holy nights and wild rides
the birth a princess with the dragons fire in her eye's
she always had the key.

passion flowers and butterfly kisses
I've always had my eye on you

your magic and grace ignite the fire in my soul
ring around the rosie a pocket full of poesy's,
their hearts turned to ashes as they fell down around you.

am I the only one to see through your disguise.

butterfly kisses to turn on the night
a dragons fire burning in deep blue eye's
a wild ride and I knew you were mine.

Godfather.
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    awesome !
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    =D
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    so beautiful, thank you for sharing.
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    "memories . . . winged in dreams"
    wow, gf
    esoteric, lilting, and lovely

    (but not hallmarky and mushy, I've GOT to figure out how to do that)
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thanks all !!!!!

    not hallmarky and mushy LOL!! that's great !!!

    Godfather.
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Godfather. wrote:
    thanks all !!!!!

    not hallmarky and mushy LOL!! that's great !!!

    Godfather.


    Sometimes I want - hallmarky and mushy !!! :D
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    lettinggo wrote:
    "memories . . . winged in dreams"
    wow, gf
    esoteric, lilting, and lovely

    (but not hallmarky and mushy, I've GOT to figure out how to do that)

    you and me both.

    for me, writing nice = hallmarky and mushy, then I get sick. lol.

    I have yet to figure out how to do it right.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    well done
    this is really very good
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    the wolf wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    "memories . . . winged in dreams"
    wow, gf
    esoteric, lilting, and lovely

    (but not hallmarky and mushy, I've GOT to figure out how to do that)

    you and me both.

    for me, writing nice = hallmarky and mushy, then I get sick. lol.

    I have yet to figure out how to do it right.

    BULLSHIT :!:

    I have not read one post from you that I would consider hallmarky or mushy. I know that most females like the mushy stuff but I am not one of them.
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    edited April 2010
    lettinggo wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    lettinggo wrote:
    "memories . . . winged in dreams"
    wow, gf
    esoteric, lilting, and lovely

    (but not hallmarky and mushy, I've GOT to figure out how to do that)

    you and me both.

    for me, writing nice = hallmarky and mushy, then I get sick. lol.

    I have yet to figure out how to do it right.

    BULLSHIT :!:

    I have not read one post from you that I would consider hallmarky or mushy. I know that most females like the mushy stuff but I am not one of them.

    But my stuff is far from happy in any way.

    this piece here from the Godfather is very uplifting and full of,.... NICE. Sweet without being mushy or hallmarky. which is great, I just can't do it.
    I wish I could, I just can't.

    again, great piece GF.

    this line alone is fantastic !

    "passion flowers and butterfly kisses
    I've always had my eye on you"

    great stuff right there.
    Post edited by the wolf on
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    EXACTLY
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    we all appreciate beauty in our own unique ways, and you certainly do so in one of the most unique ways I've ever known. you seem to appreciate the creation around us in a fuckin insightful way... I think I'm finding it hard to express what I get from your stuff. I hope I learn sometin... thanks
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    butterfly kisses to turn on the night
    a dragons fire burning in deep blue eyes
    a wild ride and I knew you were mine...

    my heart just melted......
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nuttin wrong with some mushy poetry.
    i've written thousands of romantic poems.
    so kiss my fuckin ass :mrgreen:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    chadwick wrote:
    nuttin wrong with some mushy poetry.
    i've written thousands of romantic poems.
    so kiss my fuckin ass :mrgreen:


    Chad, you are something else... can't wait to read your "mushy" poems. :D
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Ya'll, I meant no disrespect to anyone's taste. I was kidding for the most part, and my only criticism was of myself.

    GF, loved dragons fire, wire to wire
    btw I have several friends and co-workers that call me kid, (only because I act like one). I literally did laugh out loud. I do ROCK though!!
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    lettinggo wrote:
    Ya'll, I meant no disrespect to anyone's taste. I was kidding for the most part, and my only criticism was of myself.

    GF, loved dragons fire, wire to wire
    btw I have several friends and co-workers that call me kid, (only because I act like one). I literally did laugh out loud. I do ROCK though!!

    ha ha love yer heart kid !
    at 50 I still feel like a kid :D


    Godfather.
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    nuttin wrong with some mushy poetry.
    i've written thousands of romantic poems.
    so kiss my fuckin ass :mrgreen:

    LOL romantic is fine, I'm just saying I can't do nice like both GF and yourself can do. When I do it, it comes out forced.

    even mushy is okay, I just don't do it well all the time. I wish I did.

    rock on with your mushy self !!! :D
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    chadwick wrote:
    nuttin wrong with some mushy poetry.
    i've written thousands of romantic poems.
    so kiss my fuckin ass :mrgreen:

    ha ha ha that thar's some funny shit I don't care who ya are :lol:

    Godfather.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    good times
    :)
    thanks all
    good folks here
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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