She's a bit of it all. (part I)

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Rainbows are trees
and she.

She’s colors flashing up tall
reaching clouds
and blue.

Passed me she reaches the sun
bouncing from light beam to light beam
all in my eyes.

She’s rain and snow
each flake
each drop
a bit of love
for down here
and I smile in her storm.

My hands are full of wishes
and possibilities
as she holds on.

Her feelings belong to the sea
as tidal waves erode
my being.

She’s a butterfly
dreaming of me
a dolphin
or seabird.

A castle for me
all my life
her smiling face
a dream to me.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • wonderful...
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    yes, very nice.
    I bet every lady here wishes that was written about her, for her.
    This makes someone feel very special.
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Very nice, I feel happiness and sadness at the same time. Kind of bittersweet in a way. Thank you for sending.
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    pandora wrote:
    yes, very nice.
    I bet every lady here wishes that was written about her, for her.
    This makes someone feel very special.

    firstly,
    thanks to all of you.

    women inspire me like no other.

    all i know is
    that i am a fuckin dumb asshole.

    a train wreck if you will.
    really terrible.

    but i love the ladies.
    respect them fully.
    adore them.

    they make my soul shine.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    BEAUTIFUL
    BEE-UUU-TEE-FUL
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • embraceembrace Posts: 849
    lovely :D
    got a car...got some gas...oh let's get out of here-get out of here fast...
    I hope you get this message but your not home...I will be there in just a minute or so...
    I want to go but I want to go with you.

    Travel is fatal to prejudice, bigotry and narrow-mindedness and many of our people need it sorely on these accounts. Broad, wholesome, charitable views of men and things cannot be acquired by vegetating in one little corner of the earth all one's lifetime. -MT

    I've had enough, said enough, felt enough. I'm fine, still in it.
  • that was great. really made me remember feeling like that about someone. on a sidenote, im really enjoying how active this forum has become lately. i tend to come and go, but keep it up!
    "Ah, life is a gate, a way, a path to Paradise anyway, why not live for fun and joy and love or some sort of girl by a fireside, why not go to your desire and LAUGH..."
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