voice in the wind

expectorantexpectorant Posts: 36
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
waking up from winter
teased by warm wisps of hope
only to be reminded
by the quickly falling sun
of many dark cold nights
that are yet to come

I'll whisper in your ear
things I don't have the will to speak
this seems to be my own weakness
that my resolve will rise and fall
like a tide as the moon draws near

feel the winds start blowing
it's my whisper that you'll hear
shouldn't be so hard to speak
the things you already know
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    This is really great.

    thanks for posting.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • waking up from winter
    teased by warm wisps of hope
    only to be reminded
    by the quickly falling sun
    of many dark cold nights
    that are yet to come

    I'll whisper in your ear
    things I don't have the will to speak
    this seems to be my own weakness
    that my resolve will rise and fall
    like a tide as the moon draws near

    feel the winds start blowing
    it's my whisper that you'll hear
    shouldn't be so hard to speak
    the things you already know

    I love this!
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    xlnt !!!!!!

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    cooooooooool
    very cool
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    very well done :clap:
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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  • wow...thank you all ...I should stick around longer after posting
    ...thanks for encouraging... ;)
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