husband

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"Husband"

Not enough time between
the beginning of good times
and now.

It's you and me to the end
My most best, but misguided friend
Do not let them tell me how to cry
Because you know they will try

Don't let them tell me what to do
with the rest of you
You are my partner in life
and beyond
Do not let them tell me what to do

I cannot blame God
so I have to blame you
How could the two of you let this happen
You chicken shit fuckers
You and god
fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    this is sad. good, but sad.
    Peace, Love.


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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    keep writing.
    it's good for you, good for us, those who write.
    your poem is touching.
    thank you for sharing.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    Very sad,

    Right to the core of how it feels

    Keep putting your thoughts down,

    It helps us all
    peace,
    jo

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  • Its such a mad, mad world.
    Powerful writing...
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