where's home

acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
home is where death is
and a river flows nearby

river stinks a bit
cuz I drowned my dirty brain in it

but when the children played
even I'd felt that way
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  • canoegirlcanoegirl Posts: 295
    home is by the lake where dreams could fly, i felt the water that reflected the sky, here i knew our dreams would fly, home was our haven a place where we each had a voice to make a choice to rise above what was holding us back, anger gone, control gone, sarcasim gone, an unfelt weakness as i accepted his hand shake my hand he held in both of his, i should have seen this as a sign of what was to come, surrounded by the lake where i felt safe i must have let my guard down, home is by the lake surrounded with family and friends and neighbors that loved us as we loved them, now home is where we are very far but not forever far
  • i was thinkin that perhaps this ugly thread of mine should be taken out or somethin... so thanks for your words... they're nice
  • canoegirlcanoegirl Posts: 295
    wow i am so new to this computer thing, you know its funny for now this is my voice on here i want to be part of the world again i feel like i've missed so much and i do not want to be there ever again i like people i like to communicate in a healthy manner, i love life and i love music, art, nature, people, politics to a degree, lol, and the enviroment.so thank you and please bare with me im learning, not sure on how to do a lot of computer stuff yet just clueing on to the thread thing thanks to you :)
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    i was thinkin that perhaps this ugly thread of mine should be taken out or somethin... so thanks for your words... they're nice

    ugly ? not even man, very well written from deep within.

    and Canoegirl welcome, I'm still kinda new here too but the people on here are very nice people so enjoy.

    Godfather.
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