Hunger Strike Cover
No1PJFan
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Just looking for some feedback. Please let me know what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUuYbJwGREM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUuYbJwGREM
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Sounds pretty good! Singing is great, I like your voice. Little bit tighter playing as a group and that's it! Keep on rocking dudes!
All the best from Finland!
Jussi
"You put some udder cream on that shit?" ~EV 5/17/10
Manchester Aug 17th 2009
Hyde Park June 25th 2010
Manchester June 20th & 21st 2012
Leeds July 14th 2014
Thanks. For the beginning of the song I'm using the dirty channel on my amp (Blues Deluxe), when the song picks up I turn on the TS9.
No we don't have any of our own music, we just started playing together about 3 month ago. Maybe someday?
http://www.youtube.com/user/jmudd1
Second - that camera work was killing me. Maybe that is harsh but halfway through when the camera starts swinging from side to side its as if u guys have the camera hanging from a string on the ceiling. I was hanging in there to hear the high part.
Third - I think you can work on dynamics. There is not enough volume and tone variations throughout the song. This is a subtle thing which makes a huge difference. Crescendoing and building. It may help if you continue to ride the riff through the verse, it pushes the song more towards the release of the chords later. You version sounds ok though. .
Now to the good! - Very good low eddie part. Vocal tone was solid and carried the whole performance. Good job.
Overall a fairly cool look in the low lighting with the blue light. Much better than a standard bedroom shot.
Third - band is overall tight. Wondering how old you guys are? And is this a regular band or hanging out for fun?
Thanks for sharing that, good effort!
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