the door is left open...

skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
rain trickling down the windowpane
my hands pressed firmly on the cold glass

you stand there in the rain looking in...drenched
come in...I wait for you...

a warm cozy glow from the kitchen window
as grey skies surround your precious face

drops fall steadily into the puddle beside you
ripples spreading out into eternity...

empty tire swings
sleeping gardens

the door is left open...
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Comments

  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow ! awesome.

    Godfather.
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Very nice, :D
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is very sweet. :)
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i sense a lot of sadness here.
    very nice lines.
    good work.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • embraceembrace Posts: 849
    mmm- this one releases my mind- good images. nice.
    got a car...got some gas...oh let's get out of here-get out of here fast...
    I hope you get this message but your not home...I will be there in just a minute or so...
    I want to go but I want to go with you.

    Travel is fatal to prejudice, bigotry and narrow-mindedness and many of our people need it sorely on these accounts. Broad, wholesome, charitable views of men and things cannot be acquired by vegetating in one little corner of the earth all one's lifetime. -MT

    I've had enough, said enough, felt enough. I'm fine, still in it.
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