More than a house,...

the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
he sat quietly on the porch of the old house
watching the rain fall in a steady graceful dance of wet meets pavement
music spilled from the open window
filling the air with the soundtrack of his life
he sipped his beer and smiled his sad uneven smile

“they just don’t understand” he thought to himself
when looking at him they saw a man going through a “rough spot”

when he looked in the mirror he saw a little boy
a little boy who moved around enough to make him feel uneasy
new friends, new schools, new rooms, at times no friends at all

he thought of the old house as more than just brick and stone
memories both good and bad filled its walls
the best times of his life along with the worst
11 years, the longest ever spent in one place

staying in the house will be next to impossible, this he knows
in trying to do so will come much added stress
he understands this, but why can they not understand why he feels he must at least try to stay?

he cringes at the thought of that little boy moving all the time
constant change, no roots
he sips his beer and hums along to the music that escapes the window
tired of seeing the little boy in the mirror

this house is more than just brick and stone
it’s more than a house,…..
it’s his home
Peace, Love.


"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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Comments

  • very nice imagery... :D
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Thank you for sharing, Enjoy your day :D
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  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    The wolf hits another home run (reference intended)
    striking gold, man
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    edited March 2010
    fuck me I love this, but it really saddens me
    Post edited by acrossssSsssshittt on
  • I like that.

    Thank you,

    stb
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Sounds a little like the situation I'm in... :( I really like it Steve :)

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    This is really good!

    'when looking at him they saw a man going through a "rough spot"

    when he looked in the mirror he saw a little boy.'

    I love that! It's a very clever observation of human perceptions and how easily we label things/people we don't really want to try to understand....
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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