I can hear you...
weed
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I can hear you
in the background
but this is the only
hill I know of
and my free plays
are about to run out
with no money
to spend on more
besides...
I've spent too much already
have I been there?
have I been shown?
maybe... maybe not
but its hard to tell
cause ya can't look around
when you travel with your head down
and looking up
causes me to look at someone else
which only guarantees me
to be locked in the bathroom crying
there are places
that I used to like
but now I hate them
and no way to get there
even if I liked them again
just for 5 minutes
and its not my fault
so go ahead
and call me stubborn
but you haven't seen
stubborn yet
in the background
but this is the only
hill I know of
and my free plays
are about to run out
with no money
to spend on more
besides...
I've spent too much already
have I been there?
have I been shown?
maybe... maybe not
but its hard to tell
cause ya can't look around
when you travel with your head down
and looking up
causes me to look at someone else
which only guarantees me
to be locked in the bathroom crying
there are places
that I used to like
but now I hate them
and no way to get there
even if I liked them again
just for 5 minutes
and its not my fault
so go ahead
and call me stubborn
but you haven't seen
stubborn yet
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this is lovely...kind of sad in a way...the story you weave here touches on a sadness I know...
Very nice, I don't think you need to edit anything. Have a wonderful day.
I made a list of things
to cut out of my life
#3 on the list was
sadness
"but its hard to tell
cause ya can't look around
when you travel with your head down
and looking up
causes me to look at someone else
which only guarantees me
to be locked in the bathroom crying
there are places
that I used to like
but now I hate them..."
for this just rocks and I feel it so intensely...
brilliant