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acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
my music's due to you
and I'm now paying my dues

I'm lookin for you
I'm lookin for truth

I think about the heavens
man I think about you

gonna fly high soon
gonna come lookin for you

so don't hide from me
cuz I think I see you

this ain't a prayer
this is youth


if I go mad
it's only cuz I'll have heard you,
seen you

and if these wings let me down
I'll crash into you

I'll eat the grass n drink the seas
fuck I'll drown n go underground
if you want me to

and if I still got lungs
I'll scream out to you

and if you sing to me
I'll sing with you

and if I cry
it's only cuz I'll be with you

I'll repent these insides out
if I do hurt you

so don't leave me
and I'll die for you
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Awesome !

    I like this a bunch !

    Great work my friend.

    ~Steve
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    I just read your poetry, very nice. Today was a great day with several poems sent in. We have alot of talented pj fans. :D
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    I agree. There are a few extremely talented writers here.

    acrossOceans is one of them.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    the wolf wrote:
    I agree. There are a few extremely talented writers here.

    acrossOceans is one of them.


    I hope you get to see this, if not I'll send it again. But I noticed several hundred written poems/music etc on here. Would'nt it be nice if all of these can be printed into a book form and published for us PJ fans, I'll buy it. Let me know what you think, I'm sure it's easier said than done. Once again- so much talent :D
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  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    mikalina wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    I agree. There are a few extremely talented writers here.

    acrossOceans is one of them.


    I hope you get to see this, if not I'll send it again. But I noticed several hundred written poems/music etc on here. Would'nt it be nice if all of these can be printed into a book form and published for us PJ fans, I'll buy it. Let me know what you think, I'm sure it's easier said than done. Once again- so much talent :D
    I was actually thinking this same thing! Perhaps 10C could be approached with said idea and see what they think. Not saying that a few people couldn't take on the challenge themselves, but....
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    When I worked for an insurance co. We had a recipe book published. I will find it and figure out how we did it. This happend 13 yrs ago. I'll look into it !!.
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  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    this is all very humbling... it truly means a lot especially given I'm inspired bo so many of you so...

    I'd love it if everyone's poetry on this forum were published, as I always prefer words in books than on a computer as I feel they're a bit unsafe out there... and trust me, this is one challenge I could never take on by myself... I can be a lazy fucker... : ) but if I'm onto something with others, that makes a difference...
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