She's more than. (part III)

chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Everything
she’s more than counting raindrops
or stars.

She’s wind
hanging feathers from my eyes
as clouds intertwine themselves
in my hair
carrying me to her side.

Some days
when all is quiet
she can be found next to me
sitting in the sun.

Even ancient ice crystals
and snowflakes
call out her name
as time sleeps inside of her.

She must garden my being
as she uproots flowers from my dying flesh
for her vase on the kitchen table.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Spring is in the air, everyone is sending in such beautiful poems. Thank you for sharing. :D
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  • this is beauty manifested into words...where is part one and two...add them to this that I might read them together...please...
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    if i can find part 1 & 2 i will post them.
    where to look, where to search? holy shit.........scratching my head :?

    and thank you for the kind words.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    nice work chadwick.

    good luck trying to find the other parts, trust me, I know that sucks ! lol
    Peace, Love.


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    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • how you've dug deep and found the words for such intricacies of nature is really something... very nice
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    very nice. I hope you can find parts 1 and 2..I can't wait to read them. :)
    peace,
    jo

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  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    excellently done
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