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Sire's plague

Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have finally realized that I don't need you
nor do I want you.
If only I was able to see through the facade years ago
I wouldn't have wasted my time and mind worried, fearful.

You disappeared, left me alone to dwell on the past
and all of the things that I have done wrong.

You left me to figure life out on my own
only instilling the tools of hate and insecurity.

I don't even remember what love is
Happiness is foreign and undeserved.

You've never said that you're proud
never could see past all the flaws.
The memories will fade
I can only pray that it will be sooner than later.

Why can't I be good enough? If you can't see through me, how will anyone else?
Am I doomed for life?
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Nice.

    I like it. You are not doomed forever. Trust me.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    the wolf wrote:
    Nice.

    I like it. You are not doomed forever. Trust me.
    Thanks.
    Care to place a bet? ;)
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Bet ?

    that would be your doom ! you should know at this point that I'm pretty much ALWAYS right !!! ;)
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i look forward to reading more from you.
    i like this.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    ms. wes c.addle wrote:
    I have finally realized that I don't need you
    nor do I want you.
    If only I was able to see through the facade years ago
    I wouldn't have wasted my time and mind worried, fearful.

    You disappeared, left me alone to dwell on the past
    and all of the things that I have done wrong.

    You left me to figure life out on my own
    only instilling the tools of hate and insecurity.

    I don't even remember what love is
    Happiness is foreign and undeserved.

    You've never said that you're proud
    never could see past all the flaws.
    The memories will fade
    I can only pray that it will be sooner than later.

    Why can't I be good enough? If you can't see through me, how will anyone else?
    Am I doomed for life?



    Hi, I really like it. The first paragraph seems to fit me on some days. You know how to put your thoughts down on paper too. I should try this some day. Have a beautiful day. :D
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