I'm not enough

acrossssSsssshittt
acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there's so much here
but I ain't strong enough

these songs I hear
and I remember love

so much of now
is a little burdening

I look at this world
and I grieve a little

for this is Your world
and it's slowly dying
and when it rains
I know You're crying
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    Wow !

    "for this is Your world
    and it's slowly dying
    and when it rains
    I know You're crying"

    that is great, I like that a whole lot.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    I like it too- simply beautiful :D
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  • redmosquito10
    redmosquito10 Posts: 568
    thumbs up
    "Ah, life is a gate, a way, a path to Paradise anyway, why not live for fun and joy and love or some sort of girl by a fireside, why not go to your desire and LAUGH..."
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    thank you all... so much
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Brother that's great !

    did you find anything on Og.

    Godfather.
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Very Nice!!

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad

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