never forget

acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
were you here last night
or were you the moonlight
did you wake up
as we fell in love
just like we did
when we were young

it breaks me
and dear God knows it
but please come again
when I go to sleep tonight

do you remember the room last night
much like the classroom we found ourselves in
early on in this life
I could tell that you liked me
all over again
and we whispered
that we'd never leave each other, ever again

do you remember we weren't the only ones
how the room became a world for everyone
do you remember we parted ways
just like we did when we heard parting ways
and I'm finding it so hard
to remember the moment we held each other again

do you know I fought with God today
and I felt just so alone all day
I wondered why I love you still
and I remebered the time I'd seen God pray

do you remember how we fell apart
do you remember when I gave you ten
and said just please don't forget
do you remember when you gave me ten back
do you remember black
do you remember me at all?
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Comments

  • FenwayFaithfulFenwayFaithful Posts: 8,626
    Great stuff. I really like this one.
    "FF, I've heard the droning about the Sawx being the baby dolls. Yeah, I get it, you guys invented baseball and suffered forever. I get it." -JearlPam0925
  • thanks , I really appreciate it
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    this sounds like the "conversations" that play out in my head these days.
    I like it.
    From what I can tell you are too "real" and good of a person to ever be forgotten.
    I mean that.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • man that is only too kind and heartfelt... i can only hope that I'm worthy of such praise... given how many real, honest people there are in this world... and on this forum: ) and then there are Pearl Jam ...
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    there are days I've wondered those very questions myself... :roll:

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    edited March 2010
    there are days I've wondered those very questions myself... :roll:


    and those days can be torture... thanks for relating
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Wow, I really like this one!! I love all the poems sent in today. Thank you for sharing, Have a wonderful weekend.
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