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Scar Covered Hearts ( goodbye )

the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
what if I were to say to you
that I saw your future in a dream
and of course you know my dreams come true
and in it you were happy?

what if I were to walk away
with no words, just my pain
because there is nothing left to say
could you forgive me?

what if I were to say to you
that all of this is unnecessary
all the scar covered hearts
will never fully mend?

what if you were to wake in my dreams
would you finally see the things I see
that my future should be of no concern to you
because the future has no use for me, why can’t you see?

what if I just said goodbye
and walked away
because I had nothing left,……
could you ever truly forgive me?
Peace, Love.

"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    It's the scars inside, the ones unseen that hurt the most...
    Please don't say goodbye... :(

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    i know that I'm not alone, but with your words you keep remindin me... I can only hope that it's not you who keeps remindin me... touching words Wolf...
  • FenwayFaithfulFenwayFaithful Posts: 8,626
    The wolf is a real soulful dude.

    Don't leave us wolfie.
    "FF, I've heard the droning about the Sawx being the baby dolls. Yeah, I get it, you guys invented baseball and suffered forever. I get it." -JearlPam0925
  • yataheyatahe New Mexico Posts: 168
    edited March 2010
    Beautiful.
    Post edited by yatahe on
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  • yataheyatahe New Mexico Posts: 168
    Hey Wolf.

    How would you know if she truly did forgive you? It seems something difficult to realize from both parties. Is it a feeling? Only expand if you feel like it. Thanks for your poetry.
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    yatahe wrote:
    Hey Wolf.

    How would you know if she truly did forgive you? It seems something difficult to realize from both parties. Is it a feeling? Only expand if you feel like it. Thanks for your poetry.

    Hmm. that is a good question. to be honest, I guess one can never really know if they are truly forgiven by another.

    the "you" in this piece though, is not actually any one person. It's pretty much everyone I know, rolled up into one person so I could direct the questions to a singular person, and they all make up the "you".

    this came from a dream I had the other night, a very vivid dream. when I dream like that, there tends to be some sort of "truth" buried in there somewhere.

    this probably makes zero sense.. :oops:

    thanks to all for reading, and thanks for the comments.


    -steve
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Damn
    Beautiful
    Dude
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    the wolf wrote:
    yatahe wrote:
    Hey Wolf.

    How would you know if she truly did forgive you? It seems something difficult to realize from both parties. Is it a feeling? Only expand if you feel like it. Thanks for your poetry.

    Hmm. that is a good question. to be honest, I guess one can never really know if they are truly forgiven by another.

    the "you" in this piece though, is not actually any one person. It's pretty much everyone I know, rolled up into one person so I could direct the questions to a singular person, and they all make up the "you".

    this came from a dream I had the other night, a very vivid dream. when I dream like that, there tends to be some sort of "truth" buried in there somewhere.

    this probably makes zero sense.. :oops:

    thanks to all for reading, and thanks for the comments.


    -steve




    this screams "sense" : )
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