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i never had the chance

mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
edited February 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

"what a long, strange trip it's been"
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  • Ms. Wes C.addleMs. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    This is very deeply written. I have great envy for people that have this skill. Thanks for sharing.

    This place is such a great outlet for everyone's creativity... Keep it coming!
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Thanks for posting. It feels good to get that stuff out, yeah?

    I like it. Heartfelt, and a bit seething.

    more to come I hope.... ?
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    It must be healing for you to put your feelings down on paper. I wish you lots of happiness.
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  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    edited February 2010
    so profound and well written

    having read this, I feel we've been through very similar shit as far as fathers and family go... My father too was a.... well where do I start... though I do think I'm comin around to forgive but i;m all fucked up myself and it;s all a mess...

    often i think what if I wake up and find myself 6 or so years old again, in that house with my father, and find that everythin since has been a dream... i guess I see my hell...

    i wish you well
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  • JzPJzP Posts: 933
    word up! let it out.
    ~JzP
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    the wolf wrote:
    Thanks for posting. It feels good to get that stuff out, yeah?

    I like it. Heartfelt, and a bit seething.

    more to come I hope.... ?

    "a BIT seething" you are kind.
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    lettinggo wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    Thanks for posting. It feels good to get that stuff out, yeah?

    I like it. Heartfelt, and a bit seething.

    more to come I hope.... ?

    "a BIT seething" you are kind.

    ;)
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • pepperpepper Posts: 155
    This is a truly stunning poem, every line holds the story this poem has to tell...thankyou for sharing it. Even though I haven't experienced this personally, I felt every word!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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