Hunted

eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
edited January 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
(Wrote this one after running into my first wild Idaho wolf a couple months ago...)

Hunted

I do not expect her to look back
But I whistle anyway
Leaning out of my truck
Like a lust ravaged teen

What can I say?

She is my first
And you never forget
The first

She stops
Turns
All grace and attitude
And in an instant
Ten thousand years
Of glowing eyes around campfires
Nightmare fabrications
Poison bait
Steel jaws
Relentless fear
And genocide
Pass between us
A crystalline barbaric understanding

I want to apologize
For those hunting her
For those hating her
For the collar she wears

I feel compromised
Like her
Hemmed in
Dodging bullets and
Cars on highways

While the world shrinks
Around our gaze
I realize
The places we hide
Have always been
Just more places to die
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    the problem is she loves you… she loves me,
    she loves most all of us

    us
    the one's running trails,
    hills,
    and night hunts
    with the wolf

    friends?

    80,000 years ago
    is the triggered pan
    gauged on the trap

    just some trap
    or piercing bullet

    man isn't even in the cave anymore with spears and big elk calls
    man is the highway against glowing eyes if only for a lifetime
    flash and the glass shatters
    it’s the headlight against wheels and my old friend, “the wild one from the raw earth.”

    to be continued...

    nicely done, Sir.
    thank you mr. eyed for helping me write today.
    been in the funk for a long while now.

    wanna talk writing some time?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • eyedclaareyedclaar Posts: 6,980
    chadwick wrote:
    the problem is she loves you… she loves me,
    she loves most all of us

    us
    the one's running trails,
    hills,
    and night hunts
    with the wolf

    friends?

    80,000 years ago
    is the triggered pan
    gauged on the trap

    just some trap
    or piercing bullet

    man isn't even in the cave anymore with spears and big elk calls
    man is the highway against glowing eyes if only for a lifetime
    flash and the glass shatters
    it’s the headlight against wheels and my old friend, “the wild one from the raw earth.”

    to be continued...

    nicely done, Sir.
    thank you mr. eyed for helping me write today.
    been in the funk for a long while now.

    wanna talk writing some time?


    I'll talk writing anytime you want.

    I'm heading out into the hills this weekend. Hope to get some writing done. Might dig a snow cave. The wifey and I stumbled upon a pack of wild turkeys out snowshoeing (us, not the turkeys ;) ) in the middle of the deep snow covered forest recently. It was funny watching them try to get around in the powder. Also, found the den of a red fox, but we left her alone. Well, we always try to leave the animals alone as much as possible.
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    sounds good young man.
    nicely done.

    i haven't been into the deep woods for awhile now.
    perhaps that's my problem.

    nature brings out the writing.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    eyedclaar wrote:
    (Wrote this one after running into my first wild Idaho wolf a couple months ago...)

    Hunted

    I do not expect her to look back
    But I whistle anyway
    Leaning out of my truck
    Like a lust ravaged teen

    What can I say?

    She is my first
    And you never forget
    The first

    She stops
    Turns
    All grace and attitude
    And in an instant
    Ten thousand years
    Of glowing eyes around campfires
    Nightmare fabrications
    Poison bait
    Steel jaws
    Relentless fear
    And genocide
    Pass between us
    A crystalline barbaric understanding

    I want to apologize
    For those hunting her
    For those hating her
    For the collar she wears

    I feel compromised
    Like her
    Hemmed in
    Dodging bullets and
    Cars on highways

    While the world shrinks
    Around our gaze
    I realize
    The places we hide
    Have always been
    Just more places to die
    Very Deep & Sad

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
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