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justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited January 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And I wonder if you can even hear me
(when I talk under my voice like this?)
Can you even see me
(when I stand by the curtains like this?)

Something is beautiful here
(don't you feel it?)
Something 's so good here
(don't you need it?)

And I wonder, can you even hear me
(when I talk under my voice like this?)
Can you even see me
(when I stand by the window like this?)
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  • blenderman69
    blenderman69 philly Posts: 2,104
    nice poem! is it yours?...got more?
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Yeah, it's mine.

    I always have more. :? :geek:
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  • blenderman69
    blenderman69 philly Posts: 2,104
    justam wrote:
    Yeah, it's mine.

    I always have more. :? :geek:
    ....well post a few,selfish!
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    In 2009, a lot of them ended up in this thread of mine -->

    viewtopic.php?f=10&t=94127
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    have you posted this one before ? or a different version or draft of it ?
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I don't think so. Why do you ask?
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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    justam wrote:
    I don't think so. Why do you ask?

    it just seemed familiar to me. i like it a lot btw.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    the wolf wrote:
    it just seemed familiar to me. i like it a lot btw.

    Thanks. :)
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