What if.

Godfather.
Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
what if I said I needed you,do you think you might wanna take a chance
could you walk outside with me and touch the pouring rain .

what if I said I love you,could you feel the storm in my heart
can you hear the thunder crashing from the pain when we are apart
and when the full moon rises can you see the light in my eyes
a beacon here to guide you on those cold and lonley nights.

what if you said you need me and you might wanna take a chance
don't be afraid of the thunder or to touch the pouring rain
tomorow starts a new day of change and the angels will sing for you.

what if I could make your dreams come true
would you walk with me in the pouring rain and brave the thunder
of a heart that screams your name

what if......you made my dreams come true.


Godfather.
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  • skyeriverwinter
    skyeriverwinter Posts: 1,902
    okay...you've knocked my socks off with this one! why oh why can't someone write something like this for me!!!! :lol::lol::lol:
  • g under p
    g under p Surfing The far side of THE Sombrero Galaxy Posts: 18,237
    Awesome I liked that. :thumbup:
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  • PG215391
    PG215391 Posts: 24
    Beautiful, simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thank you all very much ! :P

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Man ...

    this got buried away

    this is some real Godfather shit: ) .
  • Amelias Dad
    Amelias Dad Posts: 11
    Wow! Perfectly simple. How do you do?



    What if? Huh. Well,,,,,,,, what if God was one of us? I'd ask he, she, or it where the love is?

    Why can't God be all of us? We only have one world, one chance, one life, one love, one. Why Not?

    We can make our dreams come true, I do beleive.

    What if I could see your dream and you mine? Would we be better off?

    What if we could all see eachothers? Might that make us make sense?

    Might we dream all day, not just at night?

    Childrens dreams are the purest. Listen to a child explain a dream. You may learn.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    edited March 2010
    Amelias Dad wrote:
    Wow! Perfectly simple. How do you do?



    What if? Huh. Well,,,,,,,, what if God was one of us? I'd ask he, she, or it where the love is?

    Why can't God be all of us? We only have one world, one chance, one life, one love, one. Why Not?

    We can make our dreams come true, I do beleive.

    What if I could see your dream and you mine? Would we be better off?

    What if we could all see eachothers? Might that make us make sense?

    Might we dream all day, not just at night?

    Childrens dreams are the purest. Listen to a child explain a dream. You may learn.

    I'm doing fine my friend ;)
    dream's are tangible if we hold them in our heart's, I hope all is well with you.

    Godfather.
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  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrossOceans wrote:
    Man ...

    this got buried away

    this is some real Godfather shit: ) .

    Thanx Bro. ;)

    Godfather.
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    What a beautiful - Love Letter. Thank you for sharing. What a great way to start my morning :D
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nice.
    incredible.
    very much so.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
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  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    I love this Godfather, it's simply beautiful...

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    I love this Godfather, it's simply beautiful...

    thank you. ;)

    BTW you always have the best avatar's.

    Godfather.
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Godfather. wrote:
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    I love this Godfather, it's simply beautiful...

    thank you. ;)

    BTW you always have the best avatar's.

    Godfather.
    Thank you Godfather ;):mrgreen:

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • AELARA
    AELARA Posts: 803
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    okay...you've knocked my socks off with this one! why oh why can't someone write something like this for me!!!! :lol::lol::lol:

    +1 Why can't anyone really mean it???
    I am mine!

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