After kissing hours.

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited November 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The midnight air
seems to breathe
against her neck
as if she were a sliver
of silver moonlight.

Her grace charms storm clouds
while creating the recovery
of all raindrops
to my eyes.

While holding
the darkness of the sky
against her breast
she is a constellation
of jewels
and fantasy.

Tonight
when I drift off to sleep
my bedroom window
will invite her in
to surround me.

And after kissing hours
is when she’ll be bringing me
the sun.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    very beautifully done...
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    prism wrote:
    very beautifully done...
    thank you friend.
    thank you kindly.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    very good.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • embraceembrace Posts: 849
    I really like this !!
    got a car...got some gas...oh let's get out of here-get out of here fast...
    I hope you get this message but your not home...I will be there in just a minute or so...
    I want to go but I want to go with you.

    Travel is fatal to prejudice, bigotry and narrow-mindedness and many of our people need it sorely on these accounts. Broad, wholesome, charitable views of men and things cannot be acquired by vegetating in one little corner of the earth all one's lifetime. -MT

    I've had enough, said enough, felt enough. I'm fine, still in it.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    thanks everybody.
    very nice.

    wrote it yesterday in foresty class.
    it's been a busy week.
    i've written 3 essays and a few poems in the last few days.
    lots of reading.
    endangered species: oregon spotted frog...antonio stradivari: tree harvesting for violins laws and regulations...
    write for school. for rain, write for the earth.
    what about marbled murrelets?
    squeeze a bit of creative writing, personal, my own lifetime... my own private world?
    um, no...

    sharpen my pencil
    someone wants something of me
    standards ache my head
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Very beautiful poem Chad! :)

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
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