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Black Lace

Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited March 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
black lace skin tight,fifty dollars will make her mine tonight,
put it on the table throw her in the sheets....fifty get you twenty five
the price of love ain't cheep.

she all glamor and burning lust
the smile on her face grinds my hart into dust.

so lay it on the table,put her in the sheets
fifty gets me twenty five the price if love ain't cheep.
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ha ha.. a little ditty to a Oriental friend I knew back in the day
and I can't even remember her name.

Godfather.
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    Reminds me of a poem I wrote about the same subject, but I was Inspired by a Jacob Lawrence painting. Oddly enough I used white in my poem. Golly! It was the first post of mine all those years ago:

    Inspired by Jacob Lawrence's Harlem Series No. 2, 1943

    She does not look at the food as a gift
    she receives from God, abundant and shared.
    She looks at it as coins available
    for a trade. Just show a little more than
    the white of her eye to remove the frayed
    tablecloth. Show the white of a freshly
    pressed dress that matches military
    crosses. That white smells of a harsh winter.

    She throws the coins like marbles hoping to
    grab more as they roll away and fall
    like a light inconsequential rain off
    the table. Sunlight turns them from smudged to gold.
    She locks the door and walks past each street sign,
    offers an exchange, a challenge, a game.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow ! good morning.
    very cool follow up to a old memory, interesting how life is seen through different eyes,no matter how hard
    we try to see what other's see most often of times we can not.

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshitttacrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    black lace skin tight,fifty dollars will make her mine tonight,
    put it on the table throw her in the sheets....fifty get you twenty five
    the price of love ain't cheep.

    she all glamor and burning lust
    the smile on her face grinds my hart into dust.

    so lay it on the table,put her in the sheets
    fifty gets me twenty five the price if love ain't cheep.
    *****************************************************************************

    ha ha.. a little ditty to a Oriental friend I knew back in the day
    and I can't even remember her name.

    Godfather.


    I dig the into the old stuff, and this is what I find... what a find...
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