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chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The oldest prison known,
my own.

Cold bones,
depressed skin,
barely alive… shuffling.

Everything inside
screams to hurt.

I have not breathed in joy
for years,
more than I can remember to count.

Aching to drill,
rotten tooth
the dungeon in my mind… (tormenting voices call)

Shadows slipping over cobwebs,
neck exposed.

The oldest prison know,
my own.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    yes...this...you see I did not need to write it...you already did...
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    i really like this cw, very dark, very good
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    yes...this...you see I did not need to write it...you already did...
    early bird gets the worm????
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    lettinggo wrote:
    i really like this cw, very dark, very good
    thank you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
    when love given freely is love trampled
    why love

    when every step is another stumble into a black abyss
    why lift your foot

    when every effort is made against an immovable rock
    why make an effort

    when every sun sheds light on what was
    why see

    when every moon whispers all secrets
    why sleep

    when every breath is pain filling every pore
    why breathe
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    when love given freely is love trampled
    why love

    when every step is another stumble into a black abyss
    why lift your foot

    when every effort is made against an immovable rock
    why make an effort

    when every sun sheds light on what was
    why see

    when every moon whispers all secrets
    why sleep

    when every breath is pain filling every pore
    why breathe

    because we love.

    Godfather.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    when love given freely is love trampled
    why love

    when every step is another stumble into a black abyss
    why lift your foot

    when every effort is made against an immovable rock
    why make an effort

    when every sun sheds light on what was
    why see

    when every moon whispers all secrets
    why sleep

    when every breath is pain filling every pore
    why breathe

    Damn, I know EXACTLY what you mean
    Damn
    AND, gf, I also understand your reply.
    You are all excellent word-smiths
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    chadwick wrote:
    The oldest prison known,
    my own.

    Cold bones,
    depressed skin,
    barely alive… shuffling.

    Everything inside
    screams to hurt.

    I have not breathed in joy
    for years,
    more than I can remember to count.

    Aching to drill,
    rotten tooth
    the dungeon in my mind… (tormenting voices call)

    Shadows slipping over cobwebs,
    neck exposed.

    The oldest prison know,
    my own.


    And worse off, you're gonna die in there !

    Life sentence, that is.
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