Talk To You

Thorns2010

Why can’t I get you out of my mind?

Would you let me talk to you?
About all that is, and all that will be
I swear I would never disappoint
And I just might impress you
At the least, just for a little bit

Would you let me talk to you
And tell you all that I know
I swear it would only last for a little bit
If that little bit was until the end of the world
Then maybe, at that time I would reach you
Get you to understand what it is to be me

Would you let me talk to you
And tell you that I am not all that I appear to be
That I hold inside me the answers that ring true
At least from a certain point of view
That I will hold you close, until the end of time

Would you let me talk to you
To tell you how much I love you
And to sit back and relax in the glow
Of a love shared back and forth
Until one day I would know you believe it too
What it is to be in love with you

Would you let me talk to you?

CHANGEinWAVES

I'm all ears

Thorns2010

CHANGEinWAVES wrote:

I'm all ears

Actually I had no one in mind when I wrote it. I'd say it stems more from a desire to even have someone to say that too, rather than it's about one person in particular.

CHANGEinWAVES

I was messin with ya

justam

That technique of repetition works pretty well in this one.

Thorns2010

CHANGEinWAVES wrote:

I was messin with ya

No shit, really?

stardust1976

This is really very good. It's very well written and I like it a lot. You should write more stuff like this.