"Parting Ways" lyrics
ForrestTheFish
Posts: 11
Nope, this ain't PJ's "Parting Ways," it's my own. I just used the same title...What could we possibly do without PJ's inspiration?! 
What is your interpretation and opinion? Also, based on the following, what can I improve upon regarding writing lyrics in general? Thank you very much, I truly appreciate any reply!
"Neither you nor I can see the road ahead,
And neither you nor I are old enough to rest,
'Cause neither you nor I have the power to release ourselves,
But, as you move along, you'll see the road within.
See the beauty of change seeking part in our fate.
Now, as you set forth, and as you move forward...
Break Away.
If the moment is the outcome of the past,
Then, how can we believe that the present always lasts?
Pardon me, but I'm parting ways with thee,
So, as you find your way, please, fly away with me.
See the beauty of change seeking part in our faith.
Now, as you set forth, and as you move forward...
Break Away."
What is your interpretation and opinion? Also, based on the following, what can I improve upon regarding writing lyrics in general? Thank you very much, I truly appreciate any reply!
"Neither you nor I can see the road ahead,
And neither you nor I are old enough to rest,
'Cause neither you nor I have the power to release ourselves,
But, as you move along, you'll see the road within.
See the beauty of change seeking part in our fate.
Now, as you set forth, and as you move forward...
Break Away.
If the moment is the outcome of the past,
Then, how can we believe that the present always lasts?
Pardon me, but I'm parting ways with thee,
So, as you find your way, please, fly away with me.
See the beauty of change seeking part in our faith.
Now, as you set forth, and as you move forward...
Break Away."
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