just going with the flow.. hang ten with me

whispering hands
whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
edited August 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Deep in the shadows
Of Love's cascade,
Lies life's secrets.

How deep they lie,
In each soul differs,
To each his own disguise.

The eyes the soul's window,
The mind the heart's key,
unlock your fettered doors,

Be you yet wise though,
some secrets should remain,
you may regret knowing.....

next?
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  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    whispering hands wrote:
    Deep in the shadows
    Of Love's cascade,
    Lies life's secrets.

    How deep they lie,
    In each soul differs,
    To each his own disguise.

    The eyes the soul's window,
    The mind the heart's key,
    unlock your fettered doors,

    Be you yet wise though,
    some secrets should remain,
    you may regret knowing.....

    next?

    Life's not all that you see
    The heart has a way of feeling
    Something the mind can't touch
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    let's keep this going then.

    sanctioned alone in time,
    is the knowledge of the heart,
    keep it safe to save you.
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Love's energy split across space and time
    Waits in vessels where it can thrive
    Until it's recombined by those it finds
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    Keeping the mind's eye open,
    allows you to see all,
    Love is a heartbeat away.

    dis-include visions of sorrow,
    joy will come overwhelming,
    It's all one should want to know.

    How to escape tradgedy,
    a plus side clue,
    make sure this part is observed.

    Keep your head up,
    your spirits will be lifted,
    by knowing all the above


    ( looking forward to hearing the next part from ya!)
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Don't get tied down
    Lost in the everyday
    Go beyond worldly concerns

    Things measured by time
    Will become meaningless
    In their own given hour

    Your purpose is a noble one
    Go within to find yourself
    Detach from the outer void

    Further and benefit all those around you
    Be a conduit and receptacle of the good
    Abide in a life sustaining spirit
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    damn I need to write down all of this shit!!! it's getting awesome!!!
    give me a minute or two and I'll have more, but first I'm copying this down.
  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    actually it should end there on such a perfect note. want to start another one?
  • mfc2006
    mfc2006 HTOWN Posts: 37,491
    nice work, you two!
    I LOVE MUSIC.
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  • whispering hands
    whispering hands Under your skin Posts: 13,527
    thanks it turned out pretty cool huh?

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