You flew from my hand and passed into the sun

FinsburyParkCarrots

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ... D=61146673

My improvised elegy for departed loves.

SD533

Richard, This is intensely moving, emotional and hearfelt with sadness, longing and sweeping emotion. This would be great for a movie to convey the aching loss of swelling remorse much the way Samuel Barber's "Adagio for Strings" is used in films to magnify the feelings of sorrow associated with a scene.
Thanks for posting this.

FinsburyParkCarrots

Thank you so much.

Here's the second draft.

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ... D=61252810

justam

This second one really does sound like something drifting off into space.

FinsburyParkCarrots

Final draft, before I debut it live at the New Cross Inn in London, on Sunday:

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ... d=61339339