a find

strums of longing
choruses of desire
reverberating deeply
within this canyon
a tune which has
no name
no heart
no fame
no soul

i thought i knew
a verse or two
i try to hum
but only recall
a fiery crescendo
concealing valleys
littered with
broken spirit
analog waves crash
do you hear it?
bodies thrashed
can't you feel it?

searched online
for lyrics
written by
a sexy genius
so underrated
raging
she's unbound
to the scene
underground
look her up
such a find
guaranteed
to blow your mind
If nothing is everything, I'll have it all
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  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    i like this !
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • the wolf wrote:
    i like this !

    thanks! it actually means a lot to me coming from you. i've read some of your stuff and you're a great writer.
    If nothing is everything, I'll have it all
  • mfc2006mfc2006 Posts: 37,454
    i like the imagery a lot. good job!
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  • mfc2006 wrote:
    i like the imagery a lot. good job!

    thanks, bro. your stuff is always done very well!
    If nothing is everything, I'll have it all
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    the wolf wrote:
    i like this !

    thanks! it actually means a lot to me coming from you. i've read some of your stuff and you're a great writer.

    well thank you ! i really like your stuff too . i'm happy to see more posts from some people. over the last few days some of my favorite writers have been posting more, which makes me want to post more.

    not the same few people all the damn time , yeah ?

    very cool. keep posting, i like your style.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    the wolf wrote:

    not the same few people all the damn time , yeah ?

    .
    Like me... ;)
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • the wolf wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    i like this !

    thanks! it actually means a lot to me coming from you. i've read some of your stuff and you're a great writer.

    well thank you ! i really like your stuff too . i'm happy to see more posts from some people. over the last few days some of my favorite writers have been posting more, which makes me want to post more.

    not the same few people all the damn time , yeah ?

    very cool. keep posting, i like your style.

    thanks again, bro. i'll try, but inspiration and spark is hard to come by for me these days and from the thread you started, i gather you can relate. i haven't written in a really long time, but you and a few others around here have actually inspired me to write some stuff lately. thanks for that to all of you!
    If nothing is everything, I'll have it all
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    the wolf wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    i like this !

    thanks! it actually means a lot to me coming from you. i've read some of your stuff and you're a great writer.

    well thank you ! i really like your stuff too . i'm happy to see more posts from some people. over the last few days some of my favorite writers have been posting more, which makes me want to post more.

    not the same few people all the damn time , yeah ?

    very cool. keep posting, i like your style.

    i had a bit to drink last night. this sounds shitty. i meant its nice that more people are posting, nothing bad about the others who always post. yikes. i sounded like a complete dick !
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • dimitrispearljamdimitrispearljam Posts: 139,720
    cool :)
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    searched online
    for lyrics
    written by
    a sexy genius
    so underrated
    raging
    she's unbound
    to the scene
    underground
    look her up
    such a find
    guaranteed
    to blow your mind
    the poem as a whole is very nice...but
    can I say... i'm specifically smilie about this part? :D
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
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