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Just something I am dappling with

Postby tkbelle1980 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:38 am

Gone baby gone
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby STAYSEA » Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:04 am

Tweekers call it O.B.E.

out of body experience.

How much kool aid did you drink?
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby STAYSEA » Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:17 am

my 3 three old niece is asleep finally

I hope this link works

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TwKBIIjZvUQ

I've seen this live show more than PJ...
Kinda KEWL!
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby justam » Sun Jan 06, 2013 9:24 am

This one has a nice bounce to it tinker bell. :)
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Postby STAYSEA » Sun Jan 06, 2013 3:49 pm

It has a really great flow.
I see electronica (Trance) as the rhythm .

What is the intended beat?
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby tkbelle1980 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:57 pm

I haven't figured out what this is, A poem, a song, i am just freeing what's in my head, and there is a lot in there...

I just feel like I have let myself down by becoming a slave to what I let myself become... And I am in this weird stage where I feel like I am suddenly awake and things that I use to care about seem to be coming out of me...

This is about realizing that my soul isn't dead and although I may have watched it disappear and leave me for a long while I feel like this whole transition I have been going through over the past 6 months is almost a rebirthing of sorts and I feel some of my old self coming back... I think I will open up more about what I have written here, but its a slow process for me, sharing..
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Postby tkbelle1980 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:03 pm

Thanks justam, just tinkering and grappling with something i use to do a very long time ago, writing to release... Saying something.... This is about loss of identity and the things we do to succeed, but I was rescued, some how the cosmos woke me up and shook my head and said this isn't who I am... And pearl jams music has been there every step of the way this past year, making me ponder and making me think... Bringing me back to when I use to listen to them and do my art and write poems and write about society and things I wanted to change...

Hard to explain but something is happening in me, and I am just so determined to come back to who i am really and not this character I have made up to be socially acceptable and fit in... Screw fitting in, i am just me and that's all I want to be now.

I think I will elaborate more soon and maybe add more or edit, but something is coming so watch for it.
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby dimitrispearljam » Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:37 pm

beautiful
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby STAYSEA » Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:37 pm

You have a gift, my friend.

Harness it. It's so natural.
I read very much... Your words flow like a shock waves of emotion.

Ever tried Lite Reactor ?
I can send you an invite, it's just a science fiction/horror writer's group this month.

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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby tkbelle1980 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:07 pm

STAYSEA wrote:You have a gift, my friend.

Harness it. It's so natural.
I read very much... Your words flow like a shock waves of emotion.

Ever tried Lite Reactor ?
I can send you an invite, it's just a science fiction/horror writer's group this month.

every class is forever changing

If you could send that to me I would be very interested in it! Thanks for the suggestion, it was way cool of you!

And thanks for the compliment, it's nice to see you appreciated what I had to say
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby tkbelle1980 » Mon Jan 07, 2013 10:09 pm

dimitrispearljam wrote:beautiful


Thanks dimitri! So how are you feeling today? ;)
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Re: Just something I am dappling with

Postby dimitrispearljam » Tue Jan 08, 2013 3:43 am

tkbelle1980 wrote:
dimitrispearljam wrote:beautiful


Thanks dimitri! So how are you feeling today? ;)

bad day...but need to live it.is how it is...

hope all ok there..
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