poem

keven 33keven 33 Posts: 259
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this is funny my neighbor comes running over
and says i got it i got the flava

so he's says this one is called front page news

never give up your innocence
your my love without
your the most beautiful
to me

ancient love within you
grace your air is the breeze
your tone is my home
your beauty blinds me
when you whisper i don't
need anything

words without search
love within perfect lines
true light from heaven
across to touch your love

whom you belong
edify the soul
of your love
lift up your love
shine light within
your love
i love your love


so after he reads this to me i'm holding back the laughter
cause he's cryin and all i could say is who do you think
you are shakespere , he's in the hospital now he broke
down

i want to be new
how do i do
well i know don't you

love
convicted
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    I wish i could edit this
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791

    never give up your innocence
    your my love without
    your the most beautiful
    to me

    ancient love within you
    grace your air is the breeze
    your tone is my home
    your beauty blinds me
    when you whisper i don't
    need anything

    words without search
    love within perfect lines
    true light from heaven
    across to touch your love

    whom you belong
    edify the soul
    of your love
    lift up your love
    shine light within
    your love
    i love your love
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Ghosts spot me
    Though I'm invisible
    I can see them
    In my heart

    Baby baby baby
    I'm gonna leave you

    Ghosts haunt me
    Though I'm impenetrable
    I can feel them
    In my exterior

    Baby baby baby
    I'm gonna love you
    I'm gonna leave you


  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    You have gone away
    Wish i could've went
    Guess i had to stay
    Trail of heaven scent
    Which way do i go
    Don't have a nose
    Time is moving slow
    Always sleep at home

    This is a poem titled. The unflow
    It's cool to write what you feel
    Trying to be real. Sometimes
    Sometimes you have to lie
    To get to the other side
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Your in the sky
    Up in trees
    In the heart
    By the sea
    Your in me
    I am you
    What
    Can we do
    To make it last
    I never want
    To be the past
    So I'll
    Breathe fire

    Hit the wall
    Feel your gone
    What can i do
    Without you
    Without you
    I will walk
    Try and climb
    To the dark
    To the night
    Without you
    Without you
    Grace encompass
    Circle i pace
    Wishing you well
    I fell down
    Without you

  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,788
    These are awesome when read whilst blasting some Chester Bennington.
    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,788
    Through and through
    I feel your pain
    In and out
    I'm in your veins

    It hurts a bit
    The mouth by which
    I spit the grit
    Into the pit

    So bleed with me
    See like me
    Overly
    Make me free
    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    evsgjamm

    A poem for a poem
    Thank you for joining in

    I dig your writing here
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,788
    Within

    Sharing within
    and Staring without
    No view to share
    But a screen in air

    To appreciate the word
    The letters, they herd
    Along the finger, out the hand
    This is how we connect the land

    Shyner writes it down
    Others breathe it in
    So many poems to crown
    Stuck here forever within

    Happy to share, Shyner.
    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 1
    Inspiration comes within me
    I feel the tones of pain tonight
    Lay down in the dark press on
    Shine before the dawn falls upon

    You and i we can make it through
    But sometimes it's hard to want to

    I'm so in love with leaving you here
    I'm so intent on catching your tears
    From a cloud that drops the rain
    To a picture of my shattered brain

    You and i we can make it through
    But sometimes it's hard to want to

    Within

    Sharing within
    and Staring without
    No view to share
    But a screen in air

    To appreciate the word
    The letters, they herd
    Along the finger, out the hand
    This is how we connect the land

    Shyner writes it down
    Others breathe it in
    So many poems to crown
    Stuck here forever within

    Happy to share, Shyner.
    Post edited by Shyner on
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 1
    evsgjamms
    Post edited by Shyner on
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,788
    Internal warfare

    Pouring down the pages in an unfamiliar way
    A closing of the doors, an opening of the panes
    Crashing cymbals, pounding keys and whispering voices
    It's a War on Drugs past midnight which I am downing in quiet places

    I am looking at the moon and the light shines
    As word porn makes its mark like the wind through the chimes
    Boxes fill the void tonight, the echoes are dimmed by noise
    Tomorrow is here now, and it's time to make the choice


    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • Thank you...
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Realization of the dried up mind
    I'm searching in my heart and hope to find
    A light to raise above the stage
    So others can come and share the page

    Got you in my heart
    Driving the car
    Got you in the sky
    I never wanna die
    Never wanna leave

    Praise in form of a birthday cake
    Celebrate the date and make a way
    Sincerity just walked in stole my heart
    Now I'm reaching out so far

    Got you in my heart
    I never wanna die
    Never wanna leave
    I'm dancing on my grave
    I'm looking for a sign
    I'm borrowing words i love
    Just to make it right

    Forever.                 Thanks to foo for that 1 song
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Hurts me when i say things
    In my own company
    Times that i betray you
    I'll never forget and grieve
    Why is it so hard
    I try to understand
    I come to find
    I'm not the better man
    Drained of all creativity
    My love it sets me free
    I'll just swim in the river
    Listen to her sing

  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791

    Innocence
    Truth
    Gimme love
    Gimme pain
    Soaking in
    Pouring rain
    All the same
    Listen to shame
    Not a game
    Love to play
    For the heart
    Pumping iron
    Fists raised
    Praise again
    Opinion shed
    Skin red
    Out of thought
    Feeling dry
    I do believe
    I won't die
    Dissapear
    Out of here
    Full of strength
    Yet i fear
    Lonliness
    Tempting social
    Got the sounds
    Need vocal
    Ray of light
    Beams cross sky
    In the night
    See the stars
    Getting drunk
    At smokey bars
    Afraid of cars
    Monotonous
    Rhyme
    All the time
    Gotta go
    Hair is vine
    Calling mine

  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 2
    There's a gun in my head
    Ticking like a bomb
    It says
    I'm better off dead
    But i know the pain
    It can't be real
    Cause when i feel
    The sunshine heals

    Post edited by Shyner on
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,788
    Groovy.

    Happiness is a paragraph of the mind
    Indented as a smile here and there
    Sorrow is a letter from the dark
    Each day it's stamped with care

    Clarity is hope without choice
    It clings to the hairs on my face
    Washed off with a flicker of water
    Dried up so quickly it fades

    Rest is a state of unrest
    Yours is just like mine
    Like mine it tries to remind us
    Happiness is a paragraph in time


    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • Brilliant! Thank you!
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Watching leaves affection to the wind
    Is where i begin
    Sharing thoughts from present tense
    Get it out of my head
    Whispering through the air
    Whispering to my own soul

    Let out something beautiful
    Caressing every heart
    I wish that i was comfort
    From ground up to the stars
    Whispering loving things
    Wishing it would change

    But still the hate remains
    How much difference
    Can i make
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    I heard a song
    It made me smile
    Nothing was wrong
    Just moving along
    Chapters begin
    Then they end
    A revelation
    In between
    Every eye a soul
    Every heart my home
    And I'm going
    I'm going
    Home
    Where the acts hurt
    More than the facts
    Of histories oppresion
    I suppose i regress
    I understand
    It gets a little old
    It gets a bitter cold
    Home
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 4
    Poem titled

    Nothing here for me


    I've climbed up the mountain
    Lion ate my arms and legs
    Waiting at the top was all
    My friends

    Nothing here for me

    Told me to go home
    So i bailed
    Rolling along
    I hit a storm
    It was god
    A transformation
    Of science ensued
    All my limbs
    Were used
    I found my friends

    Nothing here for me
    Post edited by Shyner on
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    I swore it was the sun
    Keeping me up
    In the dark night
    How was i to know
    The sun went home

    To be with you
    To be with you
    To be with you

    The sun went home
    To be with you
    How was i to know
    There was hope
    In a home so far

    So close
    So close

    Now it's gonna be cold
    I feel so all alone
    Covers they only mask
    The future out of grasp

    To be alone
    To be cold

    I'll never learn
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    Hi everyone my poetry comes in 3 forms today it comes in the form of 
    Goodbye

    It's time
    It's time
    It's time to say goodbye
    It's right
    It fits
    It's always on my mind
    Nice to know
    Nice to care
    Even when your gone
    I feel you there
    But it's true
    It hurts
    It's expired time
    It's time
    It's time
    It's time to say goodbye

    I guess the vitality of my poetry is diminished by the lack of different theme. 

    Thanks for reading. I'm not real. Goodbye
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 8
    I felt the waves upon my skin
    I knew then that I'd never win
    Went from flying to undercurrent
    Held me under i saw god
    My brain was on fire
    It was too bright for my mind
    The car engines roamed
    I layed there frightened
    No one ever helped me through
    Years go by my mind has healed
    But i will never be the same
    I love myself and know you 
    It's the killer in me
    It's the sealer of the deal
    Someday i will walk the walk
    And I'll be brave to be alone
    My absurdity was never 
    Stay there in the 

    Fiction

    The original draft here was sad. I love you all
    Post edited by Shyner on
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 8
    The song faded out
    God gave me silence
    I'm throwing a fit
    Just in my head
    How did i get
    To be stupid
    Where did the train
    Collide with my brain
    Phrases pound melon
    A third reference
    Coincides with duplicity
    It's raining dumb fish
    But my loves have eyes
    And i will save them all
    One by one
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 8

    Shakin like a leaf
    Deceitful creepers pound 
    It's meant to be
    I learn to love getting raped
    Still i never hide away
    I never listen to my love
    She lit the darkness
    When i cried
    She fed me melon
    Even when i lied
    Time after
    And time again
    She swept the champs
    And gathered rings
    All for me

    I hurt and whine
    Loving to shine
    In love with dying
    This could be time
    Maybe the last
    Goodbye
    Post edited by Shyner on
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 791
    edited September 8
    Heroin i don't know personally
    I might know a needle
    But how do i
    Get there
    To another side
    Where love is god
    Is there enough food here
    Maybe I'll stay
    All the poets
    Have stopped feeding
    I'm so skinny
    Maybe I'll break
    With a long winded curse
    I'll blow out the candles
    And go to church
    Church of silence
    Church of rain
    Church of woman
    Church of the wind
    Post edited by Shyner on
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