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Eye Candy Close

donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
edited December 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I didn't expect you to be there,
But there you were.
The one in the window with the camera.
Was that really him? said to myself.
Pretty sure he just took my picture.

Right then,My place in the sun had a smile.
I couldn't believe my eye's,
Was this dumb luck or fate?

So afraid, My chance up front was taken.
So many people patiently waiting
waiting for Eye Candy Close.

Lines were fractured,Time stood still.
As people passed me by.
Twenty,Then Forty,Then Sixty
This can't be happening.
Why is this happening to me?

I'm In! Where's the bathroom?
No,No! Get your spot,Then go!
I'm not that far away after all.
LOL,I didn't need these binoculars.

My place in the sun was still shining
long after the "Yellow Moon" rose.
It was better than I could imagine.
In your view,I was Eye Candy Close.

I didn't get the rail or the wine,
Or the tambourine,that you tried to give me.
I've got one better,A night to remember,
And remember you,Eye Candy Close.
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    TalonTeddTalonTedd Toronto Posts: 835
    I really like your poem about the band. Eye candy close...that is a great line. the frantic elevation of anticipation and the sweet surrender of what will just have to be. Bravo! :clap:
    I remember when, yeah. I swore I knew everything, oh yeah.
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