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Remember This?

rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
edited November 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
remember this and
beautiful you are
you are so
you
I wish you were where I am
I wish you were where I am
I wish you were

you just fill sweetly
so much of me
I'll find the ride I swear
to take us both where we'll go
take me please where we'll go
take me, take me

golden red
the heart inside of you
I cherish like my own
finding pleasure, grapes, and stones
and bikes and paths and bone
right up to folllow we should go

I wish I were where you are
I wish I were where you are
I wish I were
you are

too much to think of all at once
a river, sky and tree,
a branch tributary

across and buried down
up to the sky and capable
immense
coming from so much
and so much to build on

places we'd go
in slow eternity
everywhere are hints of
hidden treasure
wells that are trapped
to discover how deep
so much more

worthy of full inspection you are
and running out of eyes I won't
resting by the sides of each other
looking

wise you are
tender in all
if I could be placed myself very near
please
the same air to breathe
such sweet relief
I just never knew
i just never knew this much before

to discover your kiss
where do I begin
when the breath before your face
takes mine

throwing myself at you
the places where you're soft
I imagine all that could be found
in beautiful songs
and in all sad things

and where you derive
I swear I've been there
before or after you
I've been there before
or after you

the times that I can't find
are because something must be taken away

if only
rocks were sky
and easy stayed easy

remember this

is all
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    tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I love this

    reading this is calming me down
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    Thanks, Tremors
    I'm glad

    I had to laugh yesterday at you setting off "indoor fireworks".

    Have you tried smoke bombs? They're harmless. Leave a window open. I'm kidding.
    I know those "snakes" you were talking about. I used to like them as a kid.
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    tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Rollings wrote:
    Thanks, Tremors
    I'm glad

    I had to laugh yesterday at you setting off "indoor fireworks".

    Have you tried smoke bombs? They're harmless. Leave a window open. I'm kidding.
    I know those "snakes" you were talking about. I used to like them as a kid.

    Yeah, it was a rather pathetic bonfire night - November the 5th is the day a revolutionary tried to blow up the Houses of Parliament, in 1605 - so us Brits all set off fireworks on that day :?

    I still have a few fireworks left - I might youtube you clips someone has made of them!!

    j/k - I'm just delighting in being a sad case ;)

    Yes, you wrote a good poem - I had written one of my own just before reading, and posted it - but then I deleted, because I thought I would just keep it for myself.......
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    tremors wrote:
    Rollings wrote:
    Thanks, Tremors
    I'm glad

    I had to laugh yesterday at you setting off "indoor fireworks".

    Have you tried smoke bombs? They're harmless. Leave a window open. I'm kidding.
    I know those "snakes" you were talking about. I used to like them as a kid.

    Yeah, it was a rather pathetic bonfire night - November the 5th is the day a revolutionary tried to blow up the Houses of Parliament, in 1605 - so us Brits all set off fireworks on that day :?

    I still have a few fireworks left - I might youtube you clips someone has made of them!!

    j/k - I'm just delighting in being a sad case ;)

    Yes, you wrote a good poem - I had written one of my own just before reading, and posted it - but then I deleted, because I thought I would just keep it for myself.......

    :| post it, yes

    and yes you tube or were you kidding
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    tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Well I was kidding, but since you ask....... :)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOFaMgka0c0
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    hi honey . this one was/is for you :heart:
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    AnnafalkAnnafalk Sweden Posts: 4,004
    Great one :)
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    remember this and beautiful
    you are!
    THANK YOU!
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nicely nicely nicely
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    F Me In The BrainF Me In The Brain this knows everybody from other commets Posts: 30,625
    This needs to be put to music somehow. :bow:
    The love he receives is the love that is saved
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    Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    awesome is all I can say....and beautiful.

    Godfather.
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