autumn (soon) part XVI

chadwick
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valley her name
across the falling sun
so clear here
sound is painting
fitting itself around your hideaway
a small little space
like stars speckled sprinkled & poured
washed in your hair
soon
a rain saving cloud kisses
her(e) promised fading green sways below
happily she arrives
bridge walking across the sun
canyon filled dreams come closer
(she's) among hot air balloons
(drifting leaves)
floating inside everywhere
soon
water down coming
drops feeding in song
where yellow & red background hold fast
she'll be home soon
like a ship of tours welcomed back home & finally free
soon
a broken string
a poem's oil lamp
& the sound of a wet roof
where nearby trees dance letting go
time to settle in the long nap
she'll be (home)
soon
across the falling sun
so clear here
sound is painting
fitting itself around your hideaway
a small little space
like stars speckled sprinkled & poured
washed in your hair
soon
a rain saving cloud kisses
her(e) promised fading green sways below
happily she arrives
bridge walking across the sun
canyon filled dreams come closer
(she's) among hot air balloons
(drifting leaves)
floating inside everywhere
soon
water down coming
drops feeding in song
where yellow & red background hold fast
she'll be home soon
like a ship of tours welcomed back home & finally free
soon
a broken string
a poem's oil lamp
& the sound of a wet roof
where nearby trees dance letting go
time to settle in the long nap
she'll be (home)
soon
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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Very nice!
I like the mood of this one.&&&&&&&&&&&&&&0 -
hey thanks, justam
worked on it here & there for weeks
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
your poetry divine warms the heart most beautiful0
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This is the best poem I've read in a long time0
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chad your poetry is so beautiful thank you for your sharing such a beautiful gift0
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