you are thanked a tear fell on out

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited March 2015 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pearls
kinda like slow beams dancing from mornings into evenings all the time
she's so kind in here
must be a star green or blue nightsky
her eyes this song goes like (this)

how wonderful jewels appear next to me
i haven't a clue
she just does (bring warmth against me)
as today wrote for tonight
last night for this morning
being all of her entire calendars
each & every day feels this way inside

so i cry a tear or two
when piano
gets what feels like this
soft so simple
not any longer empty

let's just be in dark quiet awhile


for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

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  • hedonist
    hedonist Posts: 24,524
    Dark quiet...and light.

    You remind me in ways of my husband, chadwick - kicking ass despite loss and other harshities of life...common sense with passion...getting through health issues too damn young to experience.

    And the best - introspection and its expression, as with this writing of yours.

    All leads to character. Backbone? Not sure of the proper term.

    Sorry for the wordiness. Essentially wanted to say I liked this very much. Smiled as I took it in.
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    hey thanks, hedonist. your response is very nice & got me thinking about things. anyhow you & your husband be well & take care. thank you again
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I like the mood of this one.
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  • electronblue
    electronblue Posts: 3,502
    makes me want to cry
    but I love it!
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    have you ever heard of a band called "honey" ? these words sound like thier music, awesome !

    Godfather.
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i've never heard of honey. lemme take a guess here, are they a 1970's group? maybe they can be found on the youtube?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    hahah nooo, there a nu band with a colletive soul sound but yes they are on you tube, one of the members father was the manager for guns and roses and is currently managing some big acts and a few hot up and comers but anyway Honey is a good band.

    Godfather.

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