The Rain Song

Godfather.
Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited November 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the dawn it broke with a thounderous sound
opening every sense I have inside
bringing the song of angels in the rain
riding into the storm.

the rain is coming down
coming down on me
as I follow the angels into the storm
rain rain is coming down
and there is no place I would rather be

riding into the storm.

straight pipes thunder straight up into the sky
lightning strikes the story in my eyes
with a fist held up high
I ride straight into the storm
and the rain is coming down
rain rain is coming down.

but there no place I'd rather be.

four horse's ride with four horsemen in the sky
death,pride and pain into the eye of the storm
and through the thunder and rain
lightning strikes the story in my mind
and rain rain is coming down
coming down on me.

straight pipes thunder straight up into the sky
lightning strikes the story in my eyes
with a fist held up high
I ride straight into the storm
and the rain is coming down
rain rain is coming down on me
bringing the song of angels.

but there is no place I'd rather be.
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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    Godfather. wrote:
    opening every sense I have inside

    rain rain is coming down
    and there is no place I would rather be



    lightning strikes the story in my eyes


    but there is no place I'd rather be

    death, pride and pain into the eye
    of the storm

    there's a lot of great lines in your song, godfather,

    I like it!
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    thanks Rollings, I must admit I wanted to write something and hads some ideas but....just couldn't piece it together right.



    Godfather.
  • Annafalk
    Annafalk Sweden Posts: 4,004
    I liked it :) thanks for sharing!
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Annafalk wrote:
    I liked it :) thanks for sharing!


    thanks Anna !

    Godfather.

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