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            chadwick wrote:
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 but we're just fuckinpandora wrote: 
 Touch
 You took a vow, a pinky swear, a promise you made to her.
 Then your words...
 like stinging swords cut through the veins of love.
 Love bled in that senseless moment,
 a moment all about you.
 Your fingers now are red with disloyalty
 and trust lies dying at your hand ...
 and trust lies dying at your hand
 in full blown love?
 i am not there
 adore and breasts eating handfulls
 like honey and flowers
 i the poetry on her skin
 written under sky
 in red
 her tummy and lower
 my face implanted
 swinging the tiger by the tail
 her husband out of town
 play time holding hands in private moaning ceilings
 lock the blinds close the doors
 swing the tiger by the tail
 and we can paint the badroom blue
 the bathroom area clouds and as soft
 towels come home back down from sunbeam climbing
 and as warmth to her body
 bare and cleaned
 i would have enjoyed being the water that cleansed her filthy body
 smeared now in fragrant oils and creams
 sunflowers and femininity growing spurting springs out of thin air
 and brushy wilerness so excited a brand newday opening
 :twisted: nice poem, chadwick   
 do you have a split personality chad??? you know quoting yourself is just a tad crazy.  hear my name hear my name
 take a good look
 this could be the day
 hold my hand
 lie beside me
 i just need to say0
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 i believe i have a busy skull, yes.catefrances wrote:  
 do you have a split personality chad??? you know quoting yourself is just a tad crazy.  
 but mostly i love, adore, cherish, and wanna touch a women's body six ways from sunday.for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
 "Hear me, my chiefs!
 I am tired; my heart is
 sick and sad. From where
 the sun stands I will fight
 no more forever."
 Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0
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            Simple Moments...
 Silently we sit, I in my thoughts, jotting a few down.
 Now and then I look over, just to watch you read.
 Engrossed dark brown eyes moving quickly over the page.
 Beautiful hands.
 I smile ...
 I know ...
 first your eyes will get a little heavy, just a little.
 You'll fight it and win for a time.
 I imagine the words losing the story
 and in that last nod you will make your own ...
 a deep breath and you are peaceful in a dream.
 This simple moment wraps love around me
 hugs me hard
 feeling the memory ...
 this is you reading, napping
 next to me.0
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            very nice, pandorafor poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
 "Hear me, my chiefs!
 I am tired; my heart is
 sick and sad. From where
 the sun stands I will fight
 no more forever."
 Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0
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            Agreed - I like the visual of the vulnerability, and your perception of it.
 I applied it to my sweetheart, but thinking this is moreso about a little one.
 Either way, tenderness.0
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 It made my sweetheart get borderline weepy ...hedonist wrote:Agreed - I like the visual of the vulnerability, and your perception of it.
 I applied it to my sweetheart, but thinking this is moreso about a little one.
 Either way, tenderness.
 his heart very sweet.
 It is our mortality plus 33 years together
 there is much vulnerability and also resignation.
 Thanks for your words!0
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 To see a deer in the wild, magical.
 Through my mind run pictures,
 unexpected moments, deer sightings, on a hike or a twilight drive.
 Like the time walking in a thick, dark, moss covered woods.
 Coming upon a family of deer laying under a circle of trees.
 Appearing almost placed, picture perfect and
 remaining so until we quietly passed.
 We a guest in their home.
 Amazed I was.
 Or the time we took a moment of rest on a rock at the top
 of a very large hill high above a wildflower meadow.
 Hearing growing hoofbeats, rumbling from behind,
 a young deer sprints by, running faster than I have ever seen,
 his white tail a bobbing blur through lavender.
 A picture I have kept in my head for over 30 years.
 Countless memories of the majestic silhouettes,
 peacefully feeding,
 in the clearings of the campground chosen for that weekend.
 Countless memories of inquisitive looks from soft brown eyes,
 twitching ears at the sound of my voice saying
 'hi! how are you!'
 Memories that stir happy moments, a bond between myself and nature.
 As important to me as anything here in this world.
 God's world.
 Now the City Deer.
 A four corner busy intersection, two baby fawns feeding on tall grass,
 no Mama in sight, middle of the day.
 An 8 point buck, on a four lane highway, stopping traffic
 under the scorching summer sun.
 At the office, middle of an industrial park, lunchtime,
 a lovely doe walks casually back to a small woods that has been spared,
 allowed to remain untouched by human hand.
 A tiny bit of God's world that is home to my new friend,
 just outside the window.
 From my heart pours a sadness,
 new memories that will ache,
 pictures that will run with tears
 for the City Deer.
 They are trapped here with me as God's world disappears.0
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 This man of mine, his heart
 it's in the little things.
 New baby bunny,
 tennis ball with ears,
 lives under the deck.
 We have been enjoying him from the kitchen table,
 he sneaks out early evening
 has his dinner there where we can see.
 My man mowed the back lawn yesterday...
 I said ... you missed a little spot
 he said ... no that is the bunny acre
 I saved it for his dinner...
 this man of mine
 it's these little things
 in his heart.0
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            My Child My Life My Life
 Sitting in my office ...
 I hear her giggle at something out front ...
 giggle ... she just makes that word for me.
 Her laugh sounds small once again ...
 my little one sitting indian style
 inches from the TV screen
 dressed in flannel footy Pajamas
 she rolls over backwards, sprawling,
 laughing harder now
 till I laugh too ...
 the memory brings a smile and a tear.
 Then I hear her voice, asking dad a question ...
 her voice sounds small once again ...
 My baby, in her car seat, in the way back
 of the minivan...
 she's telling her pooh bear a story
 it has a moral she adds
 making sure Pooh gets the intended message,
 even then a determined woman in the making ...
 the memory brings a smile and a tear.
 I stand slowly walk around the corner,
 her face smiling at the sight of me ...
 "Hey Mom... you're so quiet in there,
 I didn't even know you were there!"
 her smile broadens ...
 Her smile she is small once again ...
 my precious, patiently drawing a picture
 careful to outline each stroke with a new color,
 purposely and proudly creating a masterpiece
 she magnets to the frig
 then turns to me at the sink smiles and says
 "see what I drew!" ...
 the memory brings a smile and a tear.
 She stands and comes my way ...
 "Mom you ok are you crying?"
 her concern on her lovely heart shaped face ...
 her face now grown I can see myself in her
 I see my eyes in hers
 I hear my laugh in hers
 'no hun you bring a smile and a tear is all' ...
 "oh Mom"... she hugs me.
 We feel the love we share ...
 that will forever bring a smile and a tear.0
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 Cloud On My Ceiling
 Trying times of late brought me weary
 back to bed
 though the day had barely started.
 Curled quietly next to my lady dogs
 reaching out for them now and then to feel their warmth
 my hands my feet my nose cold.
 I rolled over to watch the tall trees in the side yard sway
 bordering on violent
 a constant rushing sound through closed patio doors.
 I thought of the people that would be effected by the storm.
 I felt fortunate and sad and more weary for them.
 Just then my eye caught a bit of reflected light on my bedroom wall.
 It resembled a little cloud the size of my palm
 dancing rocking jumping about.
 I stared
 mesmerized
 watching it change shape to suit my desire.
 I thought of the phenomenon that brought it to me.
 The place that all light comes from and returns to.
 Many minutes passed till it magically met the ceiling
 Ha!
 a cloud on my ceiling
 trapped there just for me.
 Then slowly slowly it began to get smaller smaller
 and then it was gone
 poof
 disappeared.
 In that moment the thought
 'out of the darkness comes light'
 whispered from my lips.
 I look for it now each day around that time
 it has not yet returned.
 It seems it was a special light
 a special time
 more special than I knew.0
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            pandora wrote: 
 Melancholy
 just a beautiful word ... melancholy
 really
 a pretty word for a not so pretty place
 a place one can't quite place
 Melancholy
 it arrives in a fog
 creeps in
 covers thoughts
 grays it all
 so they don't matter
 so nothing matters
 Melancholy
 the aftermath of trauma
 maybe the precursor
 a sixth sense to doom
 another word for gloom
 readying a wall
 to damn the tears
 in a blue numb fortress
 the only place to hide
 Melancholy
 sounds like a tune of sad bells
 echoing defeat
 no...
 no sound
 it is silence
 except for the incessant heart beat
 that just can't stop
 with each beat
 emotion lays silent
 stifled
 Melancholy
 no energy for anger
 no energy for tears
 fear is absent
 there is no battle
 Melancholy
 defeat without battle
 Melancholy
 no game no win
 no gain to be had
 Melancholy
 walking in the rain
 without getting wet
 not seeing the birds
 not feeling the sunshine
 not wanting to
 hear a voice
 nor see a face
 no touch
 don't touch
 Melancholy
 It is not living
 it is life on hold
 till Time makes it
 just a beautiful word again
 You write so beautifully.I can relate to this and Time has come today.That what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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 this is beautifulpandora wrote: 
 Gentle Is As Gentle Goes
 So we do battle until one of us is broken?
 You say it is me...
 that I can not see.
 I say it is you ....
 that you can not can feel.
 Gentle is as gentle does.
 If you wound a heart,
 will it feel more or less?
 If you blind some one with light,
 will they see more or less?
 Gentle is as gentle does.
 Let me touch you so you might feel with me.
 Turn low the light so I might see with you.
 Gentle is as gentle does
 Blindfold removed
 heart wide open
 trusting as we go
 stronger than before
 because
 Gentle Is As Gentle Goes ....
 Mamas eyes glistened in the holiday fire
 she whispered, I don't care
 I waited choosing words I had heard before
 "people are incredibly disappointing"
 in the firelight I saw a hint of smile
 her smile
 I'm missing already, always
 she whispers back
 thanks I needed that
 her hand reaches for mine
 its just a bit cooler than it was beforeThat what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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            pandora wrote:Once More
 Once more to see your smile,
 your honey sweet face.
 Once more to feel the softness,
 warm, thick in my hands.
 Once more to live your world,
 smell the dirt, feel the grass,
 chase the chipmunks in your eyes.
 Sniff the evening breeze that's carried on the miles.
 Once more to hear you,
 your breathing echo mine,
 my little shadow, so quiet behind me,
 always there, always there,
 once more.
 Once more to feel the tiny heartbeat lay in my arms,
 hear the sigh,
 share our peace.
 My little piece of heaven.
 Once more to live a memory,
 laugh a moment.
 Once more to be young,
 young together.... again.
 Once more to not be alone.
 Once more to be with you.
 2 years today I said goodbye to my Charlie. He was a gift to me, 13 and half years of pure love.
 I pray for once more someday. This poem is how I feel, I keep it close like Charlie.That what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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            pandora wrote:THERE 
 I remember you from always even before I knew you were there
 the hushed voice under all others
 a swoosh and a breath
 I knew your words
 while doubting my own
 you were there
 the shooting star
 in the corner of my eye
 a mistaken movement
 a side glance with deep eyes
 you were there
 as sure as a sunrise and a sunset
 starts and ends each day
 as sure as love lasts forever
 and is ours to keep at least until then
 you were there
 I remember your love from always even before I knew it was there
 You amaze me.
 This is what I got http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vRWqf4Ksa2E
 The devil doesn't get all the glory.That what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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            pandora wrote:reflection in a shadow
 i awoke this morning to a lovely shadow on the wall
 intricate branches of a tree outside
 with a few lasting leaves fluttering in a breeze
 i could not feel i could not hear
 i lay mesmerized watching the shadow in fleeting moments
 we had a short time together
 i raised my hand to see it small amongst the leaves
 i moved it with the breeze
 that i could not feel that i could not hear
 i felt separate yet apart changing yet the same fleeting yet lasting
 in a moment in forever i am a reflection in a shadow
 how do you take how do you see
 a moment this way
 each day
 something simple turned
 something magic learned
 how do you take how do you see
 all of it for meThat what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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            "I sat on the porch looking at my best old friend.
 I'm old now we are both old ...
 I'd rather think weathered
 I'd rather think aged
 I'd rather think well broke in.
 We laughed at that
 me and my best old friend.
 So many miles we've traveled
 good and bad
 I always could depend on her.
 She'd get me through she'd take me there
 loyal til the end my best old friend.
 The times they don't get better
 still bumping through the years
 we're parked here on the porch now
 me and my best old friend."That what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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            wow..what a wonderful thread!"...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
 "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
 “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”0
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            Fragments of a novel
 Like pieces from a puzzle
 Scattered aboutCancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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            Delicacy evades me like the stars
 Ships come and go
 No matter
 Don't ask and I won't tell
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 Wow this takes me back. Oh yeah to be a kid again, geez 11 years old.pandora wrote:Labor Day 1966
 When I was school age
 we didn't go back to school til the day after Labor Day.
 So many of my memories of this day
 are filled with anticipation of the new school year......
 Memories of the anticipation....
 Last week Friday I would have walked up to my grade school
 to look at the long white sheets of paper
 scotch taped to the windows
 that tell each of us who our new teacher is for the year.
 There are excited happy squeals
 from those who got the preferred cool teachers.
 And boy could you tell who didn't.
 The disgusted, disappointed looks on the faces of those
 who got the mean teachers.
 I think this our first taste of politics. The unfairness of life.
 If you were the latter you were filled with the anticipation
 of a not so good 9 months to come. Damn.
 Anticipation of probably no cool field trips,
 no awesome special snack time,
 no unique projects and style of teaching that made learning fun.
 Now your world was looking rather bleak,
 it helped though to have good friends along to share in the torment.
 So who's name was listed with yours could make
 or break even the greatest or worst of news.
 It could also make or break the best friendships too,
 being separated for the school year.
 All my new folders would have been carefully color chosen
 and pre-doodled on, daisies, peace signs, initials of wanton love.
 A small pencil bag is filled with pencils
 and erasers of different colors and shapes.
 A small box of crayons too.
 There are no book bags yet, that would come much later.
 Books are stacked and carried,
 if you were a girl on your forearm against your chest,
 a boy, stacked under hand, carried macho style, against your hip.
 New school shoes peek from under the bed, super shiny and stiff,
 destined to cause some blisters before the first day is out.
 Better remember the bandaids, add them to the pencil bag,
 best not to visit the school nurse the very first day.
 My favorite back to school outfit lays on the chair,
 wool skirt, sweater, knee highs,
 even in Wisconsin this fall outfit premature for the last of the summer heat.
 But suffer we will to look good, that starts early on.
 The biggest part of Labor Day I remember
 was trying to fall asleep in the still light, warm summer evening.
 Laying there long after the sun set and the crickets started their song.
 My bed positioned by the window to feel the evening breeze
 and see the moon cast light across the backyard.
 There I would lay wondering what the new school year would bring.
 Anticipating new fun with old friends.
 The anticipation of making new friends
 and maybe new love at the tender age of ten.
 Love, even then, the greatest anticipation in life.
 where have all the years gone? almost 48 of them.Another Wow.
 Well it was just a few years later and the rest is history. Its been a fine life for me,
 I wouldn't change a thing. I like the loopback, I like the view, I got a corny rhyme for that too.That what you fear the most could meet you halfway0
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