Eddie Vedder Fan Art

Long Gone Day
Long Gone Day Posts: 216
edited February 2012 in The Porch
I made this Eddie Vedder tour poster for a project for college, I thought I would share it with the community and get some feedback on whether it's decent or not.

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Should I incorporate "Chris McCandless" or a uke? Now that I'm seeing it again, it's a bit bland.
Go listen to John Frusciante right now!
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  • peacefrompaul
    peacefrompaul Posts: 25,293
    Do as you wish to it but I find beauty in its simplicity and actually prefer it as it is.
  • Mamasan Bren
    Mamasan Bren Posts: 962
    I dig it. Perhaps a uke thrown in, in a nice spot could enhance it. I'm wondering why Summer is on there though, as he's got no summer dates?
    1/95 DC 7/95 Chicago Tor Tol Cha 96 AlpV I II Chi St L KC 98 BSB I II 99 Phx Vegas Fresno SBern 00 BSB I II 01 (met ed) Vegas Phx Fargo St. Paul Chicago Alpine V Indy Col Virg Phi I II MSG I II (got on DVD!) 03 Calg 05 Clev Vegas LA I II SBar 06 Lon Dus Cop Nij Bel 07 Phi I II DC MSG I II Har BOS I II 08, LA3/4, SD '09, MSG I II '10, Missoula, London ONT, Wrigley, SD, LA1/2, Portland. Wrigley '16 I and II. 
  • javis el errante
    javis el errante Buenos Aires Posts: 6,147
    an uke over tiny waves on the black area... bit it isn't lame as it is...
    ... I am not in the business of being liked anymore ...

  • green mountain man
    green mountain man Posts: 735
    I like it, but why call it a summer tour. Summer starts on 6/20.
  • Long Gone Day
    Long Gone Day Posts: 216
    Mamasan Bren wrote:
    I dig it. Perhaps a uke thrown in, in a nice spot could enhance it. I'm wondering why Summer is on there though, as he's got no summer dates?

    You are correct, I'll change that ASAP
    Go listen to John Frusciante right now!
  • Long Gone Day
    Long Gone Day Posts: 216
    Here we are, it just needs some slight adjustments of the lettering
    And it's cut off, wow
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    Go listen to John Frusciante right now!
  • peacefrompaul
    peacefrompaul Posts: 25,293
    Long Gone Day wrote:
    Here we are, it just needs some slight adjustments of the lettering
    And it's cut off, wow
    2ankgh.jpg

    I like it without McCandless... That's kind of done in my opinion. Maybe a Uke would be better?

    Great work though.
  • Mamasan Bren
    Mamasan Bren Posts: 962
    Maybe plop a gray uke in the center of the black mountains? Also, you have a period after the U now, but not the S?
    1/95 DC 7/95 Chicago Tor Tol Cha 96 AlpV I II Chi St L KC 98 BSB I II 99 Phx Vegas Fresno SBern 00 BSB I II 01 (met ed) Vegas Phx Fargo St. Paul Chicago Alpine V Indy Col Virg Phi I II MSG I II (got on DVD!) 03 Calg 05 Clev Vegas LA I II SBar 06 Lon Dus Cop Nij Bel 07 Phi I II DC MSG I II Har BOS I II 08, LA3/4, SD '09, MSG I II '10, Missoula, London ONT, Wrigley, SD, LA1/2, Portland. Wrigley '16 I and II. 
  • lcusick
    lcusick Posts: 310
    I like it just the way it is- simple is good!

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